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That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants.

1]That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants

2]Clean criminal records of their employees is important to investment banks; hence, a stringent background check are necessary prerequisites for employment

3]Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check

4]It is of some importance that all investment banks’ workers have clean criminal records which is why many of them undergo stringent background checks

5]The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is because they require clean criminal records of their employees
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 17 Feb 2010, 01:51
1]That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants

Correct

2]Clean criminal records of their employees is important to investment banks; hence, a stringent background check are necessary prerequisites for employment

Check ..are don’t agree. Hence incorrect

3]Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check

“it” has no clear referent. Hence incorrect

4]It is of some importance that all investment banks’ workers have clean criminal records which is why many of them undergo stringent background checks

“It is of some importance that” is wordy. Hence incorrect

5]The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is because they require clean criminal records of their employees

“ the reason” and “because” convey the same meaning. Hence Incorrect.
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 17 Feb 2010, 06:32
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1]That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants

Correct

2]Clean criminal records of their employees is important to investment banks; hence, a stringent background check are necessary prerequisites for employment

Check ..are don’t agree. Hence incorrect

3]Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check

“it” has no clear referent. Hence incorrect

4]It is of some importance that all investment banks’ workers have clean criminal records which is why many of them undergo stringent background checks

“It is of some importance that” is wordy. Hence incorrect

5]The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is because they require clean criminal records of their employees

“ the reason” and “because” convey the same meaning. Hence Incorrect.

Very neat explanation by Jade. I'd like to add that in 4, 'them' can't refer to a possessive noun. So this is one additional reason for its rejection.

But I'm still not sure why you choose A over C. Your reasoning is correct but somehow I'm not convinced with A.

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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 17 Feb 2010, 07:07
hey I think Its C.

In A which is not referring to a Noun

C holds Good

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Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check


im unable to explain but here it doesn't require a reference
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 17 Feb 2010, 07:10
can some one help me out !!!!

is my explanation given(above) to portrait A is wrong, is correct?
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 23 Feb 2010, 23:28
RaviChandra wrote:
can some one help me out !!!!

is my explanation given(above) to portrait A is wrong, is correct?



"Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check"

The problem with the above part of the sentence,IMO, is the idiom “consider”. “consider” cannot be followed by anything.. Even if we think that “it” is a placeholder., “it” will be referring to “that all of their employees”.

So if we remove “it”, the sentence would be “Because they consider that all of their employees….”, which is wrong.

As a rule “consider” cannot be followed by placeholder “it” and “there” .

I hope this helps
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 06 Mar 2010, 08:57
jade3 wrote:
"Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check"

The problem with the above part of the sentence,IMO, is the idiom “consider”. “consider” cannot be followed by anything.. Even if we think that “it” is a placeholder., “it” will be referring to “that all of their employees”.

So if we remove “it”, the sentence would be “Because they consider that all of their employees….”, which is wrong.

As a rule “consider” cannot be followed by placeholder “it” and “there” .

I hope this helps

jade3, I think you are being a little too strict about the "consider" idiom.

All of the following are correct:
I consider him my friend and mentor.
They consider this task quite difficult.
The government considers non-payment of income tax a crime.
The government considers it a crime to not pay income tax.

The preferred idiom is "consider X Y," where X is a noun (a pronoun is OK!) and Y is a noun or adjective. You just want to avoid "consider X to be Y" or "consider X as Y."

jade3 wrote:
4]It is of some importance that all investment banks’ workers have clean criminal records which is why many of them undergo stringent background checks

“It is of some importance that” is wordy. Hence incorrect

You were right to eliminate this for wordiness (and passive form). But the same wording was in (A), the choice you selected! :-)

RaviChandra wrote:
im unable to explain but here it doesn't require a reference

You are right, "it" is a dummy pronoun here and does not really refer to anything (except maybe the situation in general).

Some other examples:
It was a dark and stormy night when the ship set sail.
It may rain today.
It could be true that...
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 06 Mar 2010, 10:28
OA is
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 07 Jun 2010, 08:58
Hi all,

Let me explain why C is better than A (IMO):

1]That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants

some importance.....stringent background check - This part doesn't sound good. If it is of some importance then why the benks will go for stringent background checks?
which is why - I think it isincorrect in usage. WHICH requires a comma to separate the immediate noun it is referring to.

3]Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check

In cases involving BECAUSE [if a cause-effect relationship exists], try to place BECAUSE after the subject to check the continuity:
Investment banks, because they consider it important...., require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check.

Does the modifiers correctly modifies the nouns in the context? - YES.

Note - Use of it is correct here, as per the above sentence. It is allowed to place the pronoun before the noun if in the main clause is placed after the dependent clause.
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Re: Criminal [#permalink] New post 07 Jun 2010, 09:40
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3]Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check


I think "it" is the placeholder and doesn't refer to anything.

I vote for C. Most precise.
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Re: That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some [#permalink] New post 09 Apr 2014, 08:28
Could someone share with us a thorough analysis of the answer choices please?
More specifically issues with usage of 'which is why' in answer choice A and comparison of other answer choices with OA (C)

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Re: That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some [#permalink] New post 10 Apr 2014, 12:28
In answer choice A, the usage of "which is why" is wrong.
Which has to be preceded by a comma or by a preposition.

Hence A is wrong.

C gives us place holder pronouns.

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Re: That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some [#permalink] New post 19 Apr 2014, 06:04
got confused with the intended meaning.....

OA says "consider it important that"

but original sentence says "criminal record is of some importance to" ...

Is OA not distorting the meaning of the original sentence by omitting "some" ??
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Re: That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some [#permalink] New post 08 Jun 2014, 17:44
Hi experts,

For (E), how can we modify to make it correct?

The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is becausethey require clean criminal records of their employees

The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is that they require clean criminal records of their employees?
Re: That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some   [#permalink] 08 Jun 2014, 17:44
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