Please let me know if I have changed the meaning of what you wanted to say. With the word choices, it wasn't 100% clear the intended meaning.
The business department will play an important role in the future by bringing together private equity and growing companies. The department will assist companies seeking capital through all stages of business development including:
-Growth and Development
The business department provides much more than an infusion of capital; it provides solid advice as your business partner. With contacts, experience, and interest in your success, the business department adds unmatched value.
I'm not sure your last paragraph really adds any new information, so I left it out. I hope I helped. In some places, I wasn't exactly sure what you intended so I tried to guess.
J Allen Morris
**I'm pretty sure I'm right, but then again, I'm just a guy with his head up his a$$.
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