The commission acknowledged that no amount of money or staff members

Sentence Structure



Meaning
The sentence discusses that a commission acknowledged that no amount of money or the quantity of staff at a nuclear plant could guarantee the safety of the people that reside in the surrounding area. However, the commission approved the building of the plant because it believed the necessary safety measures have been taken.




1. Expression Error: The use of “amount of” should only be used to refer to and quantify uncountable nouns, but in the original sentence structure, it refers to the parallel uncountable noun “money” and the countable noun "staff members".

2. Connection Error: The use of the coordinating conjunction “neither / nor” is preferred in parallel structures that join elements in the negative.

Note: If you believe money is countable because a person can count how much money is spent or that is in the bank, make a note - dollars and cents are countable nouns, but money is uncountable. As an uncountable noun, money works in the same as water and air.




A. no amount of money or staff members
Incorrect: Errors as discussed in the error analysis


B. neither vast amounts of money nor staff members:
Incorrect: Modifier Errors:

1. This option repeats the error in the original sentence. The use of “amounts of” can only refer to and quantify uncountable nouns, and here it continues to quantify the countable noun “staff members.”
2. In addition, the adjective “vast” has been added to this option. The use of “vast amounts of money” is grammatically and logically correct, but “vast amounts of staff members” is idiomatically incorrect.

C. neither vast amounts of money nor numbers of staff members:
Incorrect: The use of “numbers of” is idiomatically incorrect, as used in this sentence. This expression is the plural form of “number of” and should only be used to mention a plural quantity individually and not collectively. In this sentence, the plural quantity “staff members” is used collectively.

Correct Usage: “Numbers of“ correct usage examples:

1. Prince charming got the numbers of six different princesses before he met Cinderella.
2. The first graders struggled to remember the numbers of the multiplication table.

D. neither vast amounts of money nor a large staff:
Correct: Both the uncountable noun “money” and the countable noun “staff members” have quantifying modifiers and are joined with the proper connector to maintain logical and grammatical parallel structure.


E. no matter how large the staff or how vast the amount of money:
Incorrect:
1. Connection Error: This option repeats the connection issue in the original sentence. The coordinating conjunction neither / nor is preferred in parallel structures that join elements in the negative.
2. Structural Error: This option has added the adverb “how,” which creates an awkward structure that results in the sentence not having a subject that logically connects with the verb “can ensure.”




1. The use of “amount of” can only be used to quantify uncountable nouns.
2. When joining parallel entities in the negative use neither/nor, please note whatever follow neither must follow nor and be of the same form.


I hope this helps clarify.
Cheers!
Stacey