Will2020 wrote:
mikeCoolBoy wrote:
The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.
(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow
Hi
ryanstarr! Why D is wrong? Is the construction "as transpiration from soil..." wrong in E? I noticed the SVA error, but I was wondering about the "as" construction... tks!
Hey!
I largely agree with what the very skilled
ExpertsGlobal5 has said about this with just a couple of small amendments:
As
ExpertsGlobal5 suggested, the infinitive form here (
to return) kind of implies that the return is pending in some way (like it's
going to happen), a meaning not suited to the general-truth intention. But to build on that, given the
with at the beginning of this clause, the construction would probably have to involve
returning to be correct. There's also a meaning issue in the second part of (D):
the rest of the 9 inches implies that some of those 9 inches have already gone somewhere (leaving
the rest of them to contribute to the flow). However, that's not the case here; rather, 21 of the 30 inches have already gone somewhere, and it's the
remaining 9 inches that are contributing to the flow.
And
ExpertsGlobal5 is again correct on (E). I'll only add that
as can be used either as a substitute for
because/
since or as a time marker meaning
at the same time as. Of course, neither meaning is correct here, so no matter what the
as will be wrong, but I just thought it should be mentioned. The trap the question is trying to lay with
as is that it has an overlap in meaning with
while, which can also mean
at the same time as. However, that's not the intended meaning of the
while that appears in the correct answer; instead, the
while in (A) is meant to highlight the contrast between the two parts of the clause after the semicolon.
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