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The dinosaurs in the late cretaceous period failed to survive on the planet because of factors such as inadequate food supplies, harsh weather, and an inability to adapt to the changing environment.

A) an inability
B) that they were unable
C) because they were unable
D) being unable
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Answer choice C is correct..
because XXXX and because in parallel construction
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You cannot write "inadequate food supplies" and "harsh weather" along with "an inability to adapt to the changing environment".
My answer C.
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skamal7 wrote:
Answer choice C is correct..
because XXXX and because in parallel construction


Had there been an "and" between the two examples "inadequate food supplies" and "harsh weather", your logic would've made perfect sense. But because it isn't and the two examples do not refer directly to the dinosaurs, the same should be true for the third example - an inability to....


IMO, the answer is A.
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Any solid reasons for elimination of choice E?
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Any solid reasons for elimination of choice E?


"Lacking an ability" does not clearly tell you who lacks the particular ability and is not parallel with the first two factors since it can refer directly to the dinosaurs while the first two do not. The correct usage of E would have been - "their lack of an ability".
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I think A should be right becoz when an articles like a,an,the is followed its a noun
Here in A An inabiity which is a noun and all the factors which are parallel are also noun..

So now leaning towards A
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The inability is referring to the factor, so IMO
A should be the answer
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I think its A.

The question ends with a list of factors A,B and C. Each of these factors is a noun preceded by an adjective ( noun phrase ) - inadequate food supplies, harsh weather and ....

The dinosaurs in the late cretaceous period failed to survive on the planet because of factors such as inadequate food supplies, harsh weather, and an inability to adapt to the changing environment.

A) an inability - It is a noun phrase which fits this sentence.
B) that they were unable - It is not parallel to the sentence structure.
C) because they were unable - parallelism breaks.
D) being unable - being unable is not correct. being seems to refer to present tense. The sentence already says that they failed to survive.
E) Lacking an ability - wordy, inability seems better.
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The dinosaurs in the late cretaceous period failed to survive on the planet because of factors such as inadequate food supplies, harsh weather, and an inability to adapt to the changing environment.


Somebody failed something because of factors such as: noun, noun, and noun.

A) an inability
Noun. Correct.
B) that they were unable
Not parallel.
C) because they were unable
Not parallel.
D) being unable
If: because of + being unable -> then correct. But we have: because of factors such as: being unable -> not parallel to the nouns in the list.
E) Lacking an ability
Gerund is noun but worse parallel to simple nouns in the list.
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If option E is stated as "The lacking an ability will that be right?
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If option E is stated as "The lacking an ability will that be right?


As I wrote
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E) Lacking an ability

Gerund is a noun but worse parallel to simple nouns in the list.

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use of "the"makes it a noun i guess ,which should be perfectly parallel?please correct me if this is wrong!! thanks in advance
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since the underlined portion is not covering "and" that means all factors mentioned constitute one single list . Therefore to maintain parallelism within all factors A option is best . E option is a verb , D option being is wrong ...that and because also break parallelism .

Hence Answer should be A .
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The dinosaurs in the late cretaceous period failed to survive on the planet because of factors such as inadequate food supplies, harsh weather, and an inability to adapt to the changing environment.

(A) an inability

CORRECT. The sentence contains a list of factors that kept the dinosaurs from surviving on Earth: "inadequate food supplies, harsh weather, and an inability to adapt to the changing environment." In lists of examples, all the examples must be parallel (in the same form). The list has, as its elements, nouns, which are parallel. Thus, this choice contains no error. If you understand the list, this is a pretty straightforward parallelism question.

(B) that they were unable

This choice a clause "that they were unable to communicate with Native Americans" is a part of the list instead of a noun, thus violating the parallelism.

(C) because they were unable

As in (B) this choice is incorrect because "and because they were unable to adapt …." is a clause rather than a noun, thus violating the parallelism.

(D) being unable

This choice is incorrect because "and being unable to ….." is a verb construction rather than a noun, thus violating the parallelism.

(E) Lacking an ability

This choice is incorrect because "and lacking ability to …." is a verb construction rather than a noun, thus violating the parallelism.

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