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The lawyers for the patent holder pressed the federal judge to impose an injunction against the hardware manufacturer, arguing that they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client.

a) they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client
b) the judge act immediately in order to prevent the client from suffering further damages of an economic nature
c) they should act immediately to prevent further economic damages being suffered by the client
d) the judge act immediately in order to prevent them from suffering economic damages further
e) immediate action should be taken to prevent their client from suffering further economic damages

What is wrong with B?
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a. who is they? lawyers? Federal judges? Manufacturer? or Federal judges and manufacturer togther? use of 'they' is creating ambiguity here
b. judge is made the agent of action, moreover 'from suffering further damages of an economic nature ' is very wordy - 'damages of an econmic nature' means 'economic damages'- use of such convoluted language makes this option incorrect.
c. similar to a, wrong use of they. also further damages being suffered is wrong. If the damages are further (in future, more than current) than how can they be 'being suffered' right now. being is continuous form, and is used wrongly here.
d. prevent whom? ambiguous use of them.
e. use of their here has a clear antecedent- lawyers. correct option.
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As vivesomnium noted above, "they" is a problem in both A, C, and D-- the only plural antecedent in the sentence is "lawyers." Clearly ,the intended meaning of the sentence is *not* that lawyers should act or be saved from economic damages. Or you could say that there is potential to group the lawyers and judge together into a plural unit, rendering the pronoun ambiguous. In either case, knock those choices out.

B (and D) contain another issue, though. See that front-end split among the answer choices? "They should" and "the judge act" both appear twice.

That word, "should," might have triggered a red-flag in your head-- we're in the realm of SUBJUNCTIVES!

Remember there are certain words (we call them "bossy verbs") that require the subjunctive mood. Verbs that indicate desire, suggestions, orders, etc. fall into that "bossy verb" category and require the command subjunctive. To construct the command subjunctive, take the infinitive form and cross off the "to."

He demanded that she [strike]to[/strike] STOP the car.
She required that he [strike]to[/strike] START the class on time.
Carl should [strike]to[/strike] BE the best man at your wedding.

B and D incorrectly attempt to apply the command subjunctive! The verb (or verbal, here, since "arguing" has a modifier function not a working-verb function) is NOT a "bossy" verb. Arguing isn't pleasant, but it's a back-and-forth process, not a one-way request or order.

That only leaves E, which CORRECTLY uses the subjunctive "should BE" and unambiguously uses the pronoun "their" to refer back to "lawyers."

Hope this helps.
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A very good point.. certainly helpful
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As vivesomnium noted above, "they" is a problem in both A, C, and D-- the only plural antecedent in the sentence is "lawyers." Clearly ,the intended meaning of the sentence is *not* that lawyers should act or be saved from economic damages. Or you could say that there is potential to group the lawyers and judge together into a plural unit, rendering the pronoun ambiguous. In either case, knock those choices out.

B (and D) contain another issue, though. See that front-end split among the answer choices? "They should" and "the judge act" both appear twice.

That word, "should," might have triggered a red-flag in your head-- we're in the realm of SUBJUNCTIVES!

Remember there are certain words (we call them "bossy verbs") that require the subjunctive mood. Verbs that indicate desire, suggestions, orders, etc. fall into that "bossy verb" category and require the command subjunctive. To construct the command subjunctive, take the infinitive form and cross off the "to."

He demanded that she [strike]to[/strike] STOP the car.
She required that he [strike]to[/strike] START the class on time.
Carl should [strike]to[/strike] BE the best man at your wedding.

B and D incorrectly attempt to apply the command subjunctive! The verb (or verbal, here, since "arguing" has a modifier function not a working-verb function) is NOT a "bossy" verb. Arguing isn't pleasant, but it's a back-and-forth process, not a one-way request or order.

That only leaves E, which CORRECTLY uses the subjunctive "should BE" and unambiguously uses the pronoun "their" to refer back to "lawyers."

Hope this helps.

this has helped...

i made 3-4 mistake earlier because of word "argue" and that construction.

i wll go e
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The lawyers for the patent holder pressed the federal judge to impose an injunction against the hardware manufacturer, arguing that they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client.

a) they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client
b) the judge act immediately in order to prevent the client from suffering further damages of an economic nature
c) they should act immediately to prevent further economic damages being suffered by the client
d) the judge act immediately in order to prevent them from suffering economic damages further
e) immediate action should be taken to prevent their client from suffering further economic damages

What is wrong with B?

B changes the original meaning. It is suggesting that their could be other kind of damages as well. E is is the crystal clear answer.
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The lawyers for the patent holder pressed the federal judge to impose an injunction against the hardware manufacturer, arguing that they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client.

A)they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client
B)the judge act immediately in order to prevent the client from suffering further damages of an economic nature
C)they should act immediately to prevent further economic damages being suffered by the client
D)the judge act immediately in order to prevent them from suffering economic damages further
E)immediate action should be taken to prevent their client from suffering further economic damages

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How to know that " their" in option E is not referring to Hardware manufacture? Is there some rule?
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14 Jul 2013, 23:31
HI Mountain,

It's not so much about a rule. But rather looking at a sentence logically and seeing what it could mean.

In this instance if you read E there is nothing to suggest (logically) that 'their' doesn't refer to lawyers.

In a correct sentence, you can guarantee no ambiguity.

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HI Mountain,

It's not so much about a rule. But rather looking at a sentence logically and seeing what it could mean.

In this instance if you read E there is nothing to suggest (logically) that 'their' doesn't refer to lawyers.

In a correct sentence, you can guarantee no ambiguity.

James

This really confuses me big time..... ...

In A and C- " they" is ambiguous and do not have clear antecedent but when it comes to " their" it need to be logically thought...

Anyways, thanks James... probably... more practice is required...
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This really confuses me big time..... ...

In A and C- " they" is ambiguous and do not have clear antecedent but when it comes to " their" it need to be logically thought...

Anyways, thanks James... probably... more practice is required...

hi,

the problem is in meaning..it is not like they is ambiguous....
meaning of sentence is:

The lawyers for the patent holder pressed the federal judge to impose an injunction against the hardware manufacturer, arguing that they should take immediate action in order to prevent further economic damages against their client.

THE LAWYERS(plural)===>THESE PEOPLE ARE PRESEEING FEDERAL JUDGE(SINGULAR) to impose ....against HARDWARE MANUFACTURER(SINGULAR)...

LAWYER IS ARGUING that THEY should take action......==>according to meaning who are supposed to take action....obviously FEDERAL JUDGE...WHICH IS SINGULAR....but here THEY is written to represent federal judge....thats why option A is wrong.

in option C:
c) they should act immediately to prevent further economic damages being suffered by the client ===>..IN THIS again THEY Should represent federal judge...same error as A....SINGULAR PLURAL mismatch

IN OPTION E

e) immediate action should be taken to prevent their client from suffering further economic damages===>in this case===>their clients===>whose clients are suffering ....IT IS THE LAWYERS client....and their is no other client....SINCE IT IS LAWYERS (PLURAL) CLIENT....hence THEIR (PLURAL PRONOUN)==>THIS IS CLEARLY REFERING TO LAWYERS..

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As vivesomnium noted above, "they" is a problem in both A, C, and D-- the only plural antecedent in the sentence is "lawyers." Clearly ,the intended meaning of the sentence is *not* that lawyers should act or be saved from economic damages. Or you could say that there is potential to group the lawyers and judge together into a plural unit, rendering the pronoun ambiguous. In either case, knock those choices out.

B (and D) contain another issue, though. See that front-end split among the answer choices? "They should" and "the judge act" both appear twice.

That word, "should," might have triggered a red-flag in your head-- we're in the realm of SUBJUNCTIVES!

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He demanded that she to STOP the car.
She required that he to START the class on time.
Carl should to BE the best man at your wedding.

B and D incorrectly attempt to apply the command subjunctive! The verb (or verbal, here, since "arguing" has a modifier function not a working-verb function) is NOT a "bossy" verb. Arguing isn't pleasant, but it's a back-and-forth process, not a one-way request or order.

That only leaves E, which CORRECTLY uses the subjunctive "should BE" and unambiguously uses the pronoun "their" to refer back to "lawyers."

Hope this helps.

Is there a list of moods that require the use of the subjunctive?
I thought that argue was one of them....
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The Command subjunctive is used when the verb indicates a desire, intention, command, recommendation, request, resolution, or advice. It is also used along with such words as advisable, better, desirable, directive, essential, fitting, imperative, important, necessary, urge, urgent and vital etc
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So I have just started my SC studying but why would the portion of the sentence after the comma not be considered a dangling modifier?
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25 Jun 2016, 09:56
"They" is ambiguous.

"Argue" should not be followed by a subjunctive.

Only E is correct.
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