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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the [#permalink]
26 Aug 2006, 20:55
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The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,â€
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I'd say (A) for the correct modifier and succinct parallelism.
a critique of...a vision of...
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A Chemist presented his Essays, critiquing …envisioning...
Left with D & E. Like E better as in D it seems that he is also critiquing his own vision.
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Re: SC-Humphry Davy [#permalink]
12 Jan 2007, 22:04
A. "Essay on Heat and Light", a critique of A as well as a vision of B. Correct.
B. Breaks //ism.
C. same as B, and redundant (and, as well).
D. same as B.
E. obscures the original meaning.
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Can't decide between A and B. What seems confusing to me in (A) is "as well as", so on exam day I would pick B
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Isnt " a critique" referring to “Essay on Heat and Light" ?
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A here too, his could refer to both men.... I am not sure if the modifier is correct either in E.
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A seems ok to me, others have antencedent problem.
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i'd go with E
You can't critique something since a person but you can critique something done since someone.
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vote for A
“Essay on Heat and Light,” IS A critique AND a vision of
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