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# The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway

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The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

(A) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

(B) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing- Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute along with the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

C) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

(D) A spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains reportedly have caused the recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway

(E) Heavy truck movement carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as the delayed response by the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains reportedly were the cause of the recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 06:48
A) - right ams
B) verb( was caused by ) - wrong
C) verb( was caused by ) - wrong
D) traffic jam by illegal trade as well as delay in repairing - have caused - wrong
E) traffic jam by illegal trade as well as delay in repairing - were( was ) the cause - wrong

My ans - A)
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 08:15
daagh wrote:
Can I give you small hint? What is the actual verb in each of these choices? You will have a great surprise.

God!!! How could I miss that?
The answer is C. The entire sentnce is in simple past. "Was caused" is correct and "by" is required to maintain parallelism. Answe choice B misses the word "by" and thats why its incorrect. Hope I am correct now.
Also, A is wrong because its a fragment. "Caused" is not a working verb. It should be "was caused".

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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 08:19
i think it is E - the movement blah blah AND the response blah blah (both nouns) were the cause of the jams...

"were the cause of" seems ok - "as well as" --- they were together the cause. Had it been "And" instead of "as well as" then "causes" would have been required --- but use of "as well as" requires the use of singular - "cause".
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 08:22
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OA pls. Is it C? has to be or else I am really missing something.
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 08:29
No E isn't right actually - "as well as" requires singular - so cause is fine but it needs "was" and not "were" to go with it --- so yeah E is out... Yup, I think it is C...
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 09:35
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The OA is C
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  19 Oct 2010, 17:41
Good one Daagh! I took a long time to even read through the choices but am glad I got it right. I am tagging this as a 700+ question because of the tricky noun thing and long long sentences which make it difficult to see the split.
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  02 Nov 2010, 01:02
This question also jammed me, I took 3 min to solve it but I was lucky to get correct answer.Good question. +1 to you Daagh
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  03 Nov 2010, 00:47
I guessed C without reading any of the choices and got lucky. Questions like this end up taking me a ton of time to complete since I keep second-guessing myself.
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  11 Nov 2010, 19:53
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Straight C.
Was caught in between C and B but "Along with" in B is wrong when compared with "As well as".

IMO C
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  12 Nov 2010, 03:54
A time consuming yet good question. Chose the correct answer this time!
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  08 Jan 2011, 13:26
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The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains

(A) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains -- Doesn't have a verb in the first half of the sentence. Hence Wrong.

(B) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing- Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute along with the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains"due to lack of government control enroute along with the delayed response of maintenance agencies" - Usage of Along with is wrong here.

C) The recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway reportedly was caused by a spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains - Correct !

(D) A spurt in traffic by heavy trucks carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as by the delayed response of the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains reportedly have caused the recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway - Awkward sentence formation towards the end.

(E) Heavy truck movement carrying coal and heading to Beijing as part of the illegal trade in coal that has flourished due to lack of government control enroute as well as the delayed response by the maintenance agencies to undertake timely repairs to the roads damaged in the recent incessant rains reportedly were the cause of the recent spate of traffic jams on Beijing-Tibet highway- Awkward sentence formation towards the end.

took me 3 whole minutes to answer this one. Good Question.

My Answer would be C for the above reasons.
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  12 Jan 2011, 21:09
I was confused between B & C.
and went for B.
Can anyone please explain why is "as well as" correct here not "along with".
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  13 May 2011, 20:15
A- is run on .with out helping verb a passive construction
B--is solved issue,but parallelism issue. caused by X.........along with y .
C- is solved both the issues and perfectly construct
D- convoluting the meaning and unclear in meaning
E-ditto
C is winner here.i took 3 min.but get the C at last
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  16 May 2011, 08:46
trick is to read A,B and C together.

Was ...along with are wrong usages in A and B. C is clean.
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  16 May 2011, 13:47
Does the question essentially boil down to the uses of "along with" and "as well as"? If yes then could someone please explain why "along with" is incorrect?
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Re: The Great Chinese Jam ( traffic) [#permalink]  16 May 2011, 18:18
I got it wrong with A. Can someone explain the difference between 'along with' and 'as well as'.
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