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The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

to me they all sound retarded...
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1.) Notice that the end of some of the answers include a subject/verb, so check sentence structure. ABCD each uses ", but" or ", yet" and each of these requires an independent clause on each side (S/V ", but" S/V). There is no verb after the underlined part, so we need a subject/verb in the answer after the ", but" or ", yet". This knocks out A and C. E doesn't need to be eliminated, because we don't have a comma before "but"

2.) We see "like" and "as" in the beginning, so comparisons are being tested. "like" needs to be followed by a noun. "as" can be followed by a noun or a subject/verb, but it is NOT a comparison if it is followed by a noun - it is describing function. Because we are comparing how the stars are in motion to how the planets are in motion, "as" needs to be followed by a subject/verb if it is used.

3.) The order of "stars" and "planets" changes, which usually indicates a modifier-related meaning issue. Here the sentence is intending to tell us that the "stars" are "so far away from the Earth", not the "planets".

The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being - "being" doesn't make this wrong. In fact, the GMAT sometimes starts a clause using being if it is trying to use the state of being something as the subject. What makes this answer wrong is the lack of a subject/verb after the ", yet"

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are - There is a subject/verb after ", but" and there is proper use of "like". Also, the modifier "some of them" is properly modifying "stars". Don't worry that "them" might be a little ambiguous ("stars" or "planets") because ambiguity is a lower priority than improper sentence structure, improper like/as usage, and improper meaning from improper modifier placement.

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet - Again, no verb after ", yet"

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are - "as" is followed by a noun, so it describes the function that the stars are performing, which is not the intended meaning of the sentence

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but - The modifier "some of which" is describing planets as being far away from the Earth. This is not the intended meaning of the sentence.
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A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being -using of being is not preffered for this sentence ,makes it verbose

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
-bingo. :) Like is used to compare nouns and it is used to compare stars and planets here. The rest of the sentence is gramatically correct.

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet -Use of although and yet simultaneously makes the sentence less clear .
D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are-Use of as is wrong in the sentence .As is used to compare clause ,Like is prefered

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but -Incorrect comparison.
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The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 05 Apr 2013, 22:44
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The statements says that both the stars and planets are in motion , but since the stars are farther away from earth,human eyes will not be able to see them moving.

So,we need "but" in there to bring upon the actual meaning.Retain B and D.
Like the planets --> Compares the motion of stars with that of the planets . Correct answer :)
As the planets --> incorrect comparison as we are comapring the motion of planets with stars and not just the planets.

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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 25 Jul 2013, 05:34
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kiranck007 wrote:
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Are you saying "being" is not at all a verb? My wordweb dictionary reports it as a verb too


Hi kiranck007,

“be” is an auxiliary verb, is/am/are/war/were/will etc. are different helping verbs in different forms.

Now is/am/are/war/were/will etc. are considered verbs but “be” or “being” juts by itself is never a verb that can complement a Subject. “being” is what is called present participle. Present participles are not verbs that can complement Subjects. For example:

The work is being done.
Joe, being a naughty boy, never finished his homework on time.

Hope this helps. :)
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 07 Oct 2013, 13:46
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beckee529 wrote:
The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

to me they all sound retarded...


Had no choice but to agree with (B), but the 'they' could refer either to the planets or the stars creating ambiguity. I think this is a question of the OG.
Anyways, it is meant to test the basic rule of Like/As, and also maybe a couple of other thinkgs such as using Although and yet together in the same sentence which is of course clearly wrong.

Will stick to (B) then
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Re: sc - dumb stars [#permalink] New post 23 Oct 2007, 22:17
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came from OG.. someone please shed some light for me.. i did a thorough search on the verbal forum and came up empty.. i'm just not seeing the comparison

#97 The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being
B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet
D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

to me they all sound retarded...


I take B.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being..... do not line being
B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are ...should be fine
C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet ........... no subject after yet.
D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are ....... use of "as" is wrong.
E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but ..........run on
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Re: sc - dumb stars [#permalink] New post 23 Oct 2007, 22:28
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came from OG.. someone please shed some light for me.. i did a thorough search on the verbal forum and came up empty.. i'm just not seeing the comparison

#97 The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but





to me they all sound retarded...


B. The comparison is b/w Earth & Stars which calls for 'like' to express similarity. 'They' in the latter half clearly refers to 'stars' so no ambiguity.
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 [#permalink] New post 24 Oct 2007, 04:40
phrases need "like" as its a ppreposition and clauses need "as" since it is a conjunction.

We need a prep phrase here and B fits the bill
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 06 Apr 2013, 07:51
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The statements says that both the stars and planets are in motion , but since the stars are farther away from earth,human eyes will not be able to see them moving.

So,we need "but" in there to bring upon the actual meaning.Retain B and D.
Like the planets --> Compares the motion of stars with that of the planets . Correct answer :)
As the planets --> incorrect comparison as we are comapring the motion of planets with stars and not just the planets.

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Be careful. Here, "but" and "yet" are being used as conjunctions, and "but" and "yet" are interchangeable when used as conjunctions.

I enjoy movies, yet I never get a chance to go.
I enjoy movies, but I never get a chance to go.

These are identical. "Yet" only means up until now when it is being used as an adverb.

You got the right answer, but you should not have eliminated A and C for using "yet." Also, why then is E wrong? It also uses "but" and might not need a comma.
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 02 May 2013, 01:07
All duplicate threads on this topic have been merged.

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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 24 Jul 2013, 21:27
mmagyar wrote:
1.) Notice that the end of some of the answers include a subject/verb, so check sentence structure. ABCD each uses ", but" or ", yet" and each of these requires an independent clause on each side (S/V ", but" S/V). There is no verb after the underlined part, so we need a subject/verb in the answer after the ", but" or ", yet". This knocks out A and C. E doesn't need to be eliminated, because we don't have a comma before "but"


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Aren't we supposed to read the second clause as - yet The stars being so far away.... in which case
There is a subject: The stars
and verb : being
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 24 Jul 2013, 22:14
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mmagyar wrote:
1.) Notice that the end of some of the answers include a subject/verb, so check sentence structure. ABCD each uses ", but" or ", yet" and each of these requires an independent clause on each side (S/V ", but" S/V). There is no verb after the underlined part, so we need a subject/verb in the answer after the ", but" or ", yet". This knocks out A and C. E doesn't need to be eliminated, because we don't have a comma before "but"


Hi,

Aren't we supposed to read the second clause as - yet The stars being so far away.... in which case
There is a subject: The stars
and verb : being


Hi Kiranck007

If I read you comment correctly, you mean the clause "The stars being so far away.." is correct (subject: The stars; verb: being). "being" is not a verb, it's a noun (human being) or an adjective. The main verb in this sentence is "are" (but they are so far.....)
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 24 Jul 2013, 23:41
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kiranck007 wrote:
mmagyar wrote:
1.) Notice that the end of some of the answers include a subject/verb, so check sentence structure. ABCD each uses ", but" or ", yet" and each of these requires an independent clause on each side (S/V ", but" S/V). There is no verb after the underlined part, so we need a subject/verb in the answer after the ", but" or ", yet". This knocks out A and C. E doesn't need to be eliminated, because we don't have a comma before "but"


Hi,

Aren't we supposed to read the second clause as - yet The stars being so far away.... in which case
There is a subject: The stars
and verb : being


Hi Kiranck007

If I read you comment correctly, you mean the clause "The stars being so far away.." is correct (subject: The stars; verb: being). "being" is not a verb, it's a noun (human being) or an adjective. The main verb in this sentence is "are" (but they are so far.....)


Hi,

Are you saying "being" is not at all a verb? My wordweb dictionary reports it as a verb too
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 25 Jul 2013, 07:10
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Are you saying "being" is not at all a verb? My wordweb dictionary reports it as a verb too


Hi kiranck007,

“be” is an auxiliary verb, is/am/are/war/were/will etc. are different helping verbs in different forms.

Now is/am/are/war/were/will etc. are considered verbs but “be” or “being” juts by itself is never a verb that can complement a Subject. “being” is what is called present participle. Present participles are not verbs that can complement Subjects. For example:

The work is being done.
Joe, being a naughty boy, never finished his homework on time.

Hope this helps. :)
Thanks.
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Additionally, "being" can be a gerund (basically an action acting as a noun). For example:

Being nice can be hard.

This is the most likely way that the GMAT will make "being" part of the correct answer. See OG13 SC#100
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2013, 09:06
The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

the main problem with A is that "yet being..." can modifies one of 2 previous clause. This modifier is ambiguous

this modifier can modifies the farther previous clause if the logicness is clear. in this case, This modifier can modifier either one of 2 previous clauses because there is no clear reason for the modifier to modify the farther previouse clause.

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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 14 Oct 2013, 12:46
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The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

B) Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

to me they all sound retarded...


Had no choice but to agree with (B), but the 'they' could refer either to the planets or the stars creating ambiguity. I think this is a question of the OG.
Anyways, it is meant to test the basic rule of Like/As, and also maybe a couple of other thinkgs such as using Although and yet together in the same sentence which is of course clearly wrong.

Will stick to (B) then
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I am no expert but I suggest to agree with B without any hesitation :)
As I understand there is no pronoun ambiguity if in the sentence the pronoun plays the same role as the noun .
Here Subject of the first clause is Stars so they clearly refers to Stars .

Other way of looking at it :
In phrase "some of them at tremendous speeds " Them is meant for stars
their apparent positions / their movement to be observed - If all these pronouns are referring to stars then I think no way THEY can refer to planets .
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 23 Dec 2013, 22:42
The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from the Earth that their apparent positions in the sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

We are comparing two items and not their functions: we will need to use :"like" and not "as"

A) The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being
The structure does not properly compare the starts to the planet: absence of Like and As was an indication for me
Eliminate A

C) Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet
Although + yet = redundant
Eliminate C

D) As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are
We are comparing items not functions, "As" is wrongly used here (He is as good as me; He is like me - can you spot the difference?)
Eliminate D

E) The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but
"are in motion" is used twice, "which" is used in a non-restrictive clause; in our case, the speed is a crucial comparative factor and therefore "which" is wrongly used
Eliminate E
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Re: The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion [#permalink] New post 04 Feb 2014, 12:46
Using POE,

Option A : Yet is followed by being which is not an independent clause [ Fanboys are used to connect two independent clause]
and sentence after comma is not independent.
Option C : Although introduces a dependent clause and sentence after comma introduces Yet
Option D : Incorrect use of "as" to compare two nouns.
Option E : "Which" incorrectly refers to planets .
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