mehulsayani wrote:
The writings of Emily Dickinson, considered by many the greatest poet of the nineteenth century, were attempts to capture the pain of love in a whimsical manner at odds with the stringent religious mores of the day.
1. The writings of Emily Dickinson, considered by many the greatest poet of the nineteenth century, were attempts
2. Considered by many to be the greatest poet of the nineteenth century, Emily Dickinson's writings were attempts
3. Emily Dickinson, who is considered by many as the greatest of the nineteenth century poets, attempted in her writings
4. Considered by many the greatest poet of the nineteenth century, Emily Dickinson had attempted in her writings
5. Emily Dickinson, considered by many the greatest poet of the nineteenth century, attempted in her writings
Official Explanation:
Since the sentence contains an underlined participial phrase, check for misplaced modifiers. [C]onsidered…the greatest poet currently refers to the writings of Emily Dickinson. The intention of the phrase is to modify Emily Dickinson. This is a misplaced modifier. Eliminate choice A and look for any obvious repeaters. Because none of the other answer choices begin the same way, there are no obvious repeaters. Now, evaluate the remaining answer choices individually, looking for reasons to eliminate each.
Choice B also commits a misplaced modifier error, with considered…the greatest poet incorrectly modifying the subject Emily Dickinson’s writings, which indicates that the writings were considered the greatest poet. Eliminate choice B. Choice C corrects the modifier error but commits an idiom error with the construction considered…as. The correct idiom structure leaves the word considered unaccompanied. Considered does not require a preposition to complete it. Eliminate choice C. Choice D also fixes the modifier error but introduces a new error with the use of the past perfect verb had attempted, which is incorrect because the sentence does not relate had attempted prior to any other action. This is a verb tense error, so eliminate choice D. Choice E fixes the original modifier error by using the phrase, considered…the greatest poet, to correctly modify Emily Dickinson, and does not introduce any new errors, so keep choice E.
Alternatively, if it is difficult to spot the grammar rule the sentence is testing, another strategy is to identify an error from the answers by looking for either a 2/3 split or differences among the answer choices. Because two of the answers both end with were attempts, and the remaining choices end with attempted in her writings, this difference is an indication to look for subject-verb agreement and verb tense errors.
Choice A: No. [C]onsidered…the greatest poet incorrectly refers to [t]he writings of Emily Dickinson. Misplaced modifier.
Choice B: No. [C]onsidered…the greatest poet incorrectly modifies Emily Dickinson’s writings. Misplaced modifier.
Choice C: No. The correct idiom for the word considered does not follow the word with a preposition. Idiom.
Choice D: No. The past perfect verb had attempted does not match the time frame of the sentence, since it is not placed prior to any other action. Verb tense.
Choice E: Correct.
The correct answer is choice E.