OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
The diplomatic consequences of Saudi Arabia's decision to hold down an increase in the price of oil seem at least equal, if not outweigh, the economic importance of the move.
• Strip this sentence
→ The diplomatic consequences
of Saudi Arabia's decision to hold down an increase in the price of oil seem at least equal, if not outweigh, the economic importance of the move.
→ The diplomatic consequences . . .
seem at least equal, if not outweigh, the economic importance of the move.
• The verb is
seem.•
Seem is a linking verb in this sentence (and in almost all sentences on the GMAT).
→ A linking verb, well,
links the subject to a description of the subject.
A linking verb tells us what the subject
is rather than what the subject
does.
→ The description that follows a linking verb is called a
subject complement—something that identifies or describes the subject.
Infinitives can be subject complements.
The subject complements that describe
diplomatic consequences must be some form of
equal and some form of
outweigh.
→ True, subject complements are often adjectives. But
outweigh can never be an adjective.
→ So start looking for a way to make
equal and
outweigh parallel.
Each must be a subject complement that fits with
seem.
Consequences seem
____ if not____ the economic importance of the move.
• SEEM . . . X, if not Y
Outweigh and
equal are in a construction that requires parallelism.
Again, in
Seem . . . to X, if not to Y—the X and Y elements must be parallel.
For the Y element, we have two choices:
outweigh or
outweighing.
→
The consequences seem . . . outweigh→
The consequences seem . . . outweighingNeither of those is correct. Something must be present in words that precede outweigh in order to render this construction sensible.
The something is the verbal "to equal."
In option D, the word TO "carries over" to outweigh.
Option D is the only way to make
equal into a verbal (and thus similar to
outweigh).
• SPLIT INFINITIVES
Finally, split infinitives and placement of "at least."
1) where are people getting the idea that "at least" cannot be placed before "to equal"?
That idea is not accurate.
The infinitive is
to equal. The modifier is
at least.When we put
at least between the word
to and the word
equal, we split the infinitive.
Although you will not be tested on split infinitives because the issue is too contentious, on the GMAT, you are very unlikely to see "to at least equal."
2) In fact, on the GMAT, I have seen
one split infinitive in the non-underlined portion, and zero split infinitives in correct
answer choices.
Watch for split infinitives in official questions.
You will not find many. You may not find any.
I don't like split infinitives, so I'm sort of glad that GMAT SC writers do not like them, either.
Many of you with very good prose skills are not yet aware that although GMAT does not test split infinitives, it does not like them, either.
The phrase
to at least equal is not likely to be part of a GMAT answer.
Now you know.
Correct and GMAT-like:
at least to equalTHE OPTIONSQuote:
A) seem at least equal, if not outweigh
• the adjective
equal and the verb
outweigh are not parallel
• See whether the second part of the subject complement [i.e.,
outweigh] fits with
seem Consequences seem . . . outweigh the economic importance of the move. That sentence does not work.
• See whether the first part of the subject complement (
equal) fits with
seem→
Wrong: consequences seem equal . . . the economic importance→ the consequences seem
equal TO the economic importance
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) seem at least equal to, if not outweigh
•
equal to is an adjective that not parallel with the verb
outweigh• See whether the second part of the subject complement [i.e.,
outweigh] fits with
seem →
Nonsensical:Consequences seem . . . outweigh the economic importance of the move. ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) seem at least equal to, if not outweighing
• check the second part of the subject complement:
→
Nonsensical: consequences . . . seem outweighing the economic importance of the move.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) seem at least to equal, if not [to] outweigh
• Bingo. We have two infinitive phrases that are proper subject complements, that fit with
seem, and that are parallel.
→
The diplomatic consequences seem to equal the economic importance of the move.→
The diplomatic consequences seem to outweigh the economic importance of the move.Those work.
(Now, the sentence actually means that at the very least,
the diplomatic consequences seem equal to the economic importance of the move. In fact, the consequences even seem to outweigh the economic importance of the move.)
KEEP D
Quote:
E) seem equal, at least, if not to outweigh
• the adjective
equal is not parallel with the infinitive
to outweigh• we need . . .
seem TO equal, at least, if not to outweigh . . .ELIMINATE E
The best answer is D.
COMMENTSGCMEMBER , welcome to SC Butler.
I'm a bit under the weather and fear that my fever may be interfering with the clarity of my prose.
I'll check back and edit if needed.
I've read what I've written a few times: it appears to be comprehensible.
Members of this crew are spirited. Good for you!
I like the dialogue.
A couple of you were really close to reasoning yourselves to the correct answer.
I think most people forgot to focus on subject complements (the thing on the other side of a linking verb).
And now you'll remember that infinitives can be (and often are) subject complements.
I don't care that the answers are all over the place.
This process is exactly how we learn.I promise that the next time an infinitive is lurking around, you will catch it. (Well, assuming you read my OE.)
Kudos to all. You were brave.