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Unbiased third-party "clean" teams can protect sensitive data while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting negotiations.

A. while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting
B. while also assessing the business concerns for a deal, as well as helping the development of an integrated business plan, and to support the
C. and assess the rationale of a deal from a business perspective, help the development of an integrated business plan, and supporting relevant
D. while facilitating the assessment of a business rationale of a deal, help to develop a business plan of integration, and supporting the
E. and assist the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support
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09 Jan 2007, 17:27
I think A stands correct..... after while assesing all the verbs are parallel

In E , assist the assessment of doesn't sound right....
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09 Jan 2007, 18:12
3rd party can protect,assist and support should be in parallel

E does that
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09 Jan 2007, 18:33
buckkitty wrote:
Unbiased third-party "clean" teams can protect sensitive data while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting negotiations.

A. while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting
B. while also assessing the business concerns for a deal, as well as helping the development of an integrated business plan, and to support the
C. and assess the rationale of a deal from a business perspective, help the development of an integrated business plan, and supporting relevant
D. while facilitating the assessment of a business rationale of a deal, help to develop a business plan of integration, and supporting the
E. and assist the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support

POE results in A and E left. A breaks //ism: "They can protect X while assessing Y, helping to do Z, and supporting W". Simply not //, whereas E: "They can protect X and assist Y, helping to do Z, and support W". ItÂ´s a bit odd but proper, nevertheless.

ItÂ´s E in my view.
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09 Jan 2007, 18:56
I think A is correct

it seems to me that "assessing..., helping..., and supporting..." are all present participles (adjectives) and ll each other.

Any othe thoughts?
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09 Jan 2007, 19:29
hsampath wrote:
I think it is E.

buckkitty wrote:
Unbiased third-party "clean" teams can protect sensitive data while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting negotiations.

A. while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting

Not parallel to "can protect"

B. while also assessing the business concerns for a deal, as well as helping the development of an integrated business plan, and to support the

C. and assess the rationale of a deal from a business perspective, help the development of an integrated business plan, and supporting relevant

D. while facilitating the assessment of a business rationale of a deal, help to develop a business plan of integration, and supporting the
E. and assist the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support
helping to develop is right here because the assessment helps developing the plan.

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10 Jan 2007, 08:37
A for me.

A. while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting

B. while also assessing the business concerns for a deal, as well as helping the development of an integrated business plan, and to support the â€“ use of also is excessive.

C. and assess the rationale of a deal from a business perspective, (to) help the development of an integrated business plan, and supporting relevant â€“ help requires â€˜toâ€™ in infinitive form.

D. while facilitating the assessment of a business rationale of a deal, help to develop a business plan of integration, and supporting the â€“ Parallelism issues â€“ facilitating the; help a; supporting the

E. and assist (in) the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support â€“ assist (in) the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale.
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11 Jan 2007, 00:07
E for me.

"Unbiased third-pary 'clean' teams" can do two things: (A) protect and (B) assist.
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11 Jan 2007, 04:40
Sorry about the multiple posts. Something wrong with the system, and I cant seem to delete them either.
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11 Jan 2007, 06:25
OA is A. assessing, helping and supporting should be parallel as many of you mentioned.
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28 Apr 2014, 07:05
buckkitty wrote:
Unbiased third-party "clean" teams can protect sensitive data while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting negotiations.

A. while assessing the business rationale of a deal, helping to develop an integrated business plan, and supporting
B. while also assessing the business concerns for a deal, as well as helping the development of an integrated business plan, and to support the
C. and assess the rationale of a deal from a business perspective, help the development of an integrated business plan, and supporting relevant
D. while facilitating the assessment of a business rationale of a deal, help to develop a business plan of integration, and supporting the
E. and assist the assessment of the dealâ€™s business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support

I am still not clear why E is wrong here, we can see E as below,

Unbiased third-party "clean" teams can protect sensitive data and assist the assessment of the deal's business rationale, helping to develop an integrated plan for the business, and support negotiations.

here clean teams can protect and assist (parallel verbs) ; helping to develop and support (parallel verbs); Please help me understand how to spot such errors further.
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