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(A) to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono’s back injury. (B) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono and his back injury. (C) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months because of front man Bono’s back injury. (D) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono and his back injury. (E) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed because of front man Bono and his back injury. [Reveal] Spoiler: Explanation OA: C. Note first the decision between “his hands” and “their hands”. This is a pronoun decision, but one that requires some logical reasoning. Did these people all get John’s hands on tickets? Logically, that makes no sense - so they must have gotten their own hands on the tickets, leading to choice B or choice C. Then the difference comes down to “front man Bono AND his back injury” or “front man Bono’s back injury”. Notice the flaw in B - Bono and his back injury are not two separate reasons for the tour’s delay. It’s one event - Bono’s back injury. Again, logic prevails and the correct answer is C. _________________ Founder of GMAT Club US News Rankings progression - last 10 years in a snapshot - New! Just starting out with GMAT? Start here... Need GMAT Book Recommendations? 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(D) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono and his back injury. “His hands” should be “their hands” and The author indicates that Bono’s injury is the reason,not Bono. (E) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed because of front man Bono and his back injury. “His hands” should be “their hands”and The author indicates that Bono’s injury is the reason,not Bono. Furthermore, this option lacks “by several months” so it does not fully convey the author’s intention. Intern Joined: 01 Jun 2012 Posts: 26 Concentration: Entrepreneurship, Social Entrepreneurship WE: Information Technology (Consulting) Followers: 0 Kudos [?]: 7 [0], given: 4 Re: Veritas Prep 10 Year Anniversary Promo Question #4 [#permalink] ### Show Tags 18 Sep 2012, 19:00 'A' is definitely not the right answer because I have trouble with the phase "to get his hands" and "due to front man Bono’s back injury". The "his" got ot be "their" because of the phrase "one of the few people who...". The tour got delayed because of Bono's back injury not because of Bono and his back injury. That looks like there are two separate reason when actually it is only one. 'B' is partly correct because of the "their" clause, but still has the "due to front man Bono’s back injury" clause. so not the right one. 'C' looks perfect, possibly the right answer. 'D' & 'E' not really because of the "his" clause. So the right answer is "C" Senior Manager Joined: 23 Oct 2010 Posts: 386 Location: Azerbaijan Concentration: Finance Schools: HEC '15 (A) GMAT 1: 690 Q47 V38 Followers: 21 Kudos [?]: 322 [0], given: 73 Re: Veritas Prep 10 Year Anniversary Promo Question #4 [#permalink] ### Show Tags 18 Sep 2012, 21:22 IMHO, one more vote for A,since " to get his hands " is ok _________________ Happy are those who dream dreams and are ready to pay the price to make them come true I am still on all gmat forums. msg me if you want to ask me smth Intern Joined: 07 Sep 2012 Posts: 8 Followers: 0 Kudos [?]: 0 [0], given: 0 Re: Veritas Prep 10 Year Anniversary Promo Question #4 [#permalink] ### Show Tags 19 Sep 2012, 02:45 John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury. (A) to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono’s back injury. (B) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono and his back injury.--- Their can't refer to John, his in the end is refering to Bono or John not clear. Wrong (C) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months because of front man Bono’s back injury. Their is not correct.Wrong (D) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono and his back injury. Who is redundant, his is not clear referent. Wrong (E) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed because of front man Bono and his back injury. Who is redundant, his is not having clear referent.Wrong A is correct. Manager Status: SLOGGING : My son says,This time Papa u will have to make it : Innocence is BLISS Joined: 16 Jan 2012 Posts: 210 Location: India WE: Sales (Energy and Utilities) Followers: 4 Kudos [?]: 53 [0], given: 30 Re: Veritas Prep 10 Year Anniversary Promo Question #4 [#permalink] ### Show Tags 19 Sep 2012, 06:16 The intent : The match was delayed ......... WHY ?..... Reason --- Brono's injury ( the match was not delayed for Brono per se ) Thus B / D / E : Eliminated ( states : the delay was for Brono & his injury ) Left with A n C : The intent : 1. Few people could lay THEIR hands on the ticket 2. John was one of the lucky few. Now if I try to logically BIND 1&2 : C wins C : John was one of the few people......( now something about these people , what's so special about them? They could manage to lay THEIR hands on the ticket........the foll part aptly binds/refers back to this sp group by the usage of THEIR ) ................to lay THEIR hands on the ticket. Thus THEIR outweighs HIS , leading to C ,my take. Left Manager Joined: 18 Aug 2006 Posts: 118 Location: United States WE: Consulting (Telecommunications) Followers: 1 Kudos [?]: 49 [0], given: 44 Re: Veritas Prep 10 Year Anniversary Promo Question #4 [#permalink] ### Show Tags 19 Sep 2012, 07:26 one of the.....that/who always takes a plural number. that eliminates A, D and E. using split technique we find that B is verbose and awkward "due to the front man....AND his ......" alters the meaning of the sentence. So C hands down. 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John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury.

(A) to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono’s back injury.
(B) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono and his back injury.
(C) to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months because of front man Bono’s back injury.
(D) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months on account of front man Bono and his back injury.
(E) who got his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed because of front man Bono and his back injury.

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OA: C. Note first the decision between “his hands” and “their hands”. This is a pronoun decision, but one that requires some logical reasoning. Did these people all get John’s hands on tickets? Logically, that makes no sense - so they must have gotten their own hands on the tickets, leading to choice B or choice C. Then the difference comes down to “front man Bono AND his back injury” or “front man Bono’s back injury”. Notice the flaw in B - Bono and his back injury are not two separate reasons for the tour’s delay. It’s one event - Bono’s back injury. Again, logic prevails and the correct answer is C.

Two things here. First, due to is terrible. I’d rather use because of. Now, there is correct here because we are referring to all the people that got tickets.And of course, the show was delayed because of Bono's back injury not by Bono and his back injury sepearetely which doesn't make any sense to me. So actually, there were three things not two.

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05 Dec 2016, 07:59
Hi guys,
I have a question about "John was one of the few people to get "

Isn't "to" a bit strange as we are trying to describe group of people?
Should the sentence be "John was one of the few people who ..."
I couldn't agree more for the rest of the explanation that the correct version should be option C,for this option correctly use " their" and "because of"
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John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury.

My analysis of the question.

Clause 1: John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2's North American tour
Subject is John and not few people because few people are part of the prepositional phrase (of the......)
Verb is was
This is correct as one clause and one subject verb pair.

Clause 2: a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury.
The subject is tour and that correctly refers to tour here and further explains about it.
The verb is was.

The sentence is correct and thus answer should be A.

Can anyone please explain why C makes sense and how few people is the subject despite being part of the prepositional phrase?

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John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour – a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury.

My analysis of the question.

Clause 1: John was one of the few people to get his hands on an advance ticket for U2's North American tour
Subject is John and not few people because few people are part of the prepositional phrase (of the......)
Verb is was
This is correct as one clause and one subject verb pair.

Clause 2: a tour that was delayed by several months due to front man Bono’s back injury.
The subject is tour and that correctly refers to tour here and further explains about it.
The verb is was.

The sentence is correct and thus answer should be A.

Can anyone please explain why C makes sense and how few people is the subject despite being part of the prepositional phrase?

Thanks

Option C (Correct):
"Few people" is not the subject, but the object of the sentence. The construction is as follows:
Main verb: "was"
Subject: "John"
Object: "few people"

The modifier "to get their hands on an advance ticket for U2’s North American tour" refers to "few people".

Finally, there is an absolute phrase ("a tour that was delayed by several months because of front man Bono’s back injury"), which modifies the entire main clause. (This part is NOT a clause - there is no verb for the noun "a tour" - the verb "was delayed" is within the relative pronoun modifier "that was delayed .... injury"). The structure of the absolute phrase is: Noun ("a tour") + Noun modifier ("that was delayed....injury")

Option A (Wrong):
Option A is wrong because "his" wrongly refers to "few people".
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