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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become


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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become


Please explain why an answer is wrong.


"Who had " correctly modifies Vivian Thomas.
> eliminates B,C,D

A has tense problem - "had'..."struggling"

E is my pick
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A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become <-- CORRECT
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Vivien Thomas, who ...(non defining clause), struggled against overwhelming odds to become X and eventually to receive X.

Furthermore, when you recognize the correct structure of the sentence you know it must be (B) or (E), since both have the correct 'to become', and voilà you have the 2-3 split! (E) is the correct answer. Cheers
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good explanations...the OA is E.
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OA is E.

Vivien Thomas, who had no formal training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from JHU.
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Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

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Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

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Though i m not an expert but below is my take on this:

there is no verb for main sub Vivien Thomas.
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If option D was modified as mentioned, then the structure of the sentence would become

Subject, non essential modifier, descriptive clause.

There would be no main verb as sujit2k7 mentioned.

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Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
Subject,modifier,modifier,Subject is awkward.
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
Sentence fragment with two back to back modifiers
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
Subject who he struggled is awkward.
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
Sentence fragment
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become
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Option "D" is a run on sentence - look at this : :idea:

Vivien Thomas,who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.

The sentence is not complete. Also " and eventually to receive " is not parallel. It should be "became a cardiac surgeon and received" OR as in option "E" .
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bmwhype2 wrote:
Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become


Please explain why an answer is wrong.


Meaning of sentence- Vivian thomas had no formal medical training. He struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and received eventually a doctorate from JHU.

A) Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Incomplete sentence- 'Vivian Thomas he became'
B) Vivien Thomas, having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Very weird sentence structure.
C) Vivien Thomas, who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Vivian Thomas he struggled against- Incomplete sentence
D) Vivien Thomas, who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Having had is not right. 'became' is not parallel to 'to receive'
E) Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Vivian thomas struggled against ...... 'to become' and 'to receive' are parallel.

E is the answer
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