Please help to evaluate my profile:
GMAT: 710 (Q49, V37)+AWA 4.5
University: Top 10 University in China.
Oversea: Exchange to Taiwan National Tsinghua University for 2 months
WE on matriculation date: 6Y
Industry: Commercial banking on corporate finance (HSBC 2.5Y + Societe Generale 3.5Y)
Position: Sales, credit analyst, senior credit analyst (Coach 4 junior credit analysts)
-Training junior staffs and coaching them to complete the work of credit analyst.
-Leading team to complete complex projects such as big case drafting and evaluating
-In charge of the whole progress of corporate/groups’ credit facilities by monitoring and controlling every step of each facility from credit proposal preparation, credit documentation checking to drawdown management and maintenance.
-Maintain existing facility and non-facility customer relationship by daily service and cross-selling bank products and detecting the potential business.
-In charge of the communication and coordination between Commercial Banking Department and Risk department, Operation Department etc.
-In Mar2012, promoted to Senior Credit analyst and in charge of coaching junior staffs.
-In Mar2012, awarded the Staff Annual Performance Appraisal rating of Outstanding (1st in department)
-In Mar2011, obtained the Staff Annual Performance Appraisal rating of Strong
Sales and assistant in commercial banking department.
-In Jul2009,awarded the Staff Half Year Performance Appraisal rating of Outstanding (1st in the range of branch and 1st in the range of department);
-In Mar2009,awarded the Staff Annual Performance Appraisal rating of Outstanding (2nd in the range of branch, 1st in the range of department);
-In Mar2009, assisted the branch to win the 1st position of X-referral program in all Chinese branches;
-In Mar2008, obtained the Staff Annual Performance Appraisal rating of Strong (3rd in the range of branch,2nd in the range of department).
-Have supported the whole commercial banking department including 3 managers and 1 officer as the only assistant and won the best branch among the tier 2cites during the branch opening period from Jul2007 to Jun2008.
-Orchestra members of University, played 2 different musicians
- Always played in Bars and Hotel Lounges as Pianist to earn my university tuition
-Won some prizes for my piano performance.
-Opened an online shop to sell cosmetic during university period.
-Always be the dancer in the annual dinners of our bank.
-Love animals and take care of homeless animals in my living district as volunteer.
MBA concentration: Finance/ Corporate finance
Short term goal:Attend leading program of commercial banks and help commercial banks to explore channels globally
Long term goal: focus on cross culture and countries business coordinator and explorer
1.I can not clearly find the long term goal and I do not know whether there is such a role, and whether the goal is realistic
2.Will my background fit the schools I dreamed? Or is there any other recommended schools from your side?
3.As you can see, my GMAT score is not strong enough, so what can I do to strength my whole package?
4.Any other suggestions?
Thank you so much ~
Waiting for your evaluation.