You have a very strong candidacy and there is no glaring weakness from what you have written. What will be most important now is that you present your "personal brand" well and use your recommendations and personal essays to support this. Recommendations and personal essays tend to be underestimated in the admissions process, however they will be critical for you.
Which business school are you most interested in attending?
Here is some school specific advice for Harvard Business School and the Stanford GSB:http://www.stacyblackman.com/category/harvard-advice/http://www.stacyblackman.com/category/stanford-advice/
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