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# When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York

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When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the
opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it took less than eight days and cost less than$6.
A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the
opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost$100; using the canal, it
C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo
to New York City took three weeks and cost $100; on the canal the move D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost$100; moving it on the canal
E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks
before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100, but in using the canal, the move If you have any questions you can ask an expert New! Manager Joined: 11 Mar 2008 Posts: 116 Location: Canada Followers: 1 Kudos [?]: 19 [0], given: 0 Re: SC-Erie Canal [#permalink] ### Show Tags 30 Nov 2008, 00:37 ans is C 1. underlined part is parallel to the the rest of the sentence 2. B is parallel but: "moving wheat before opening canal, it took 3 weeks" -- wrong construction vivektripathi wrote: When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost$100, but when the canal
was used, it
took less than eight days and cost less than $6. A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost$100, but when
the canal was used, it
B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the
Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100; using the canal, it C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost$100; on the canal the move
D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks
from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100; moving it on the canal E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing$100, but in using the canal, the
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30 Nov 2008, 03:16
Hi guys,

IMO C

A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the
opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it being B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost$100; using the canal, it wordy, the firts it is not needed
C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo Hold
to New York City took three weeks and cost $100; on the canal the move D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost$100; moving it on the canal it's not //. To move and moving
E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks
before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100, but in using the canal, the move It's not //. to move and the move OA and Source? Thanks _________________ mates, please visit my profile and leave comments http://gmatclub.com/forum/johnlewis1980-s-profile-feedback-is-more-than-welcome-80538.html I'm not linked to GMAT questions anymore, so, if you need something, please PM me I'm already focused on my application package My experience in my second attempt http://gmatclub.com/forum/p544312#p544312 My experience in my third attempt http://gmatclub.com/forum/630-q-47-v-28-engineer-non-native-speaker-my-experience-78215.html#p588275 Senior Manager Joined: 05 Jun 2008 Posts: 307 Followers: 2 Kudos [?]: 124 [0], given: 0 Re: SC-Erie Canal [#permalink] ### Show Tags 01 Dec 2008, 09:29 JohnLewis1980 wrote: Hi guys, IMO C A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost$100, but when
the canal was used, it being
B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the
Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100; using the canal, it wordy, the firts it is not needed C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo Hold to New York City took three weeks and cost$100; on the canal the move
D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks
from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100; moving it on the canal it's not //. To move and moving E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing$100, but in using the canal, the
move It's not //. to move and the move

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Guys, I have question with ans C -"Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost \$100; on the canal the move"
1) Use of ;
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01 Dec 2008, 11:31
for me the use of ; is difficult. I think it should be used to separate two grammatically independent sentences, which I think can be applied in this case.

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