When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Senaca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.

a) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Senaca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
------------when drafting...included in...was a call... Awkward Eliminate-----

b) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
------------Introduces Modifier error, Changes Meaning eliminate-----

c) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Wowen's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
-- by far the best, lets check rest, but "had been" is passive ---------

d) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
--------- call that as adopted --- changes meaning -- wrong ----

e) When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
----------- Correct ----------------

hmm..i am stuck between C and E..

I agree C is passive while E is active therefore I will go with E..

When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Senaca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.

a) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Senaca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement. --Who drafting, "it"?

b) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote. --ECS wrote the Convention?

c) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Wowen's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.

d) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.

e) When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement. --Correct

I know its OA is E because this is prep question. However, I like C.

In E, it is active and looks clean, but E can be understood that Elizabeth drafted the declaration after it was adopted in the convention. Logically sounds wrong!!!

The event squence should be
i) Elizabeth drafted the declaration and included a call for the female franchisement in the declaration

ii) Then, the declaration could be adopted in the convention.

So, my saying is, even though C is using passive voice, logical meaning is over E.

This is my thinking.

Def. E.

Everything else has a misplaced modifier except C and E.

However "it" in C is ambigious. I held on to this until I saw E, which fixes the modifier error and clearly states that SHE included it.