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# When Margaret Thatcher won the British general election in

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When Margaret Thatcher won the British general election in 1979, she had become Europe’s first woman PM, although the world had seen its very first female head of state , Sirimavo Bendaranaike of Sri Lanka, 19 years earlier.

A. When Margaret Thatcher won
B. Upon Margaret Thatcher’s winning
C. Whenever Margaret Thatcher won
E. At the time Margaret Thatcher won
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15 Jan 2010, 21:22
E.

"When Margaret Thatcher won..." seems to be talking about the time itself rather than an event at that time or circumstances of the time. Because the sentence discusses an event at a certain period of time, E appears to be the best for leading into this. The meaning is best communicated by E.

This is a tough question. It certainly is between A and E though. What's the OA?

EDIT: I just saw the source is Peterson's Master the GMAT book, but the book on Google Books omits the page with the answer to this question (the question itself is presented at question #2 on one of the tests within the book).

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When Margaret Thatcher won the British general election in 1979, she had become Europe’s first woman PM, although the world had seen its very first female head of state , Sirimavo Bendaranaike of Sri Lanka, 19 years earlier.

A. When Margaret Thatcher won
B. Upon Margaret Thatcher’s winning
C. Whenever Margaret Thatcher won
E. At the time Margaret Thatcher won

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17 Jan 2010, 08:52
I'm having problems with B. What does "she" refer to? There is no Margaret Thatcher in this sentence, only the noun "Margaret Thatcher's winning."

I agree with jallenmorris. For me, though, I picked E because it just sounded better. Second place goes to A.
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17 Jan 2010, 11:48
I agree about "she". If you take out all of the adjectives to reduce the sentence down to only what is there and what can function as the antecedent you get:

Upon winning the British general election in 1979, she had become Europe’s first woman PM, although the world had seen its very first female head of state , Sirimavo Bendaranaike of Sri Lanka, 19 years earlier.

In this sentence, "she" has no antecedent.

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I'm having problems with B. What does "she" refer to? There is no Margaret Thatcher in this sentence, only the noun "Margaret Thatcher's winning."

I agree with jallenmorris. For me, though, I picked E because it just sounded better. Second place goes to A.

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