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Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

A. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
B. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies
C. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
D. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete
E. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies
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Re: SC: lines of cpmpetition [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 06:58
Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

A. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
B. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies
---> it would be fine if "competing companies" were " companies that compete" ...coz if not, "one day" is of no use here.

C. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
----> wrong comparison between "the lines of ..." and "the internet" ---> out.

D. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete
-----> same as C.

E. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies.
----->"those of " is " lines of competitions " ---> again, wrong comparison ---> out.

A stands fine.
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 [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 07:06
A. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
- more appropriate, even though not perfect IMO.
B. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies
- seems to imply that the internet industry is also among the "more established" industries.
C. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
- should be internet industry
D. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete
- not clear what "they" refers to: industries or lines of competition
E. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies
- same argument as D
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 [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 08:59
Going with B here .


"as companies that compete one day" was the bone of contention there but went with B because starting the sentence with "Whereas" looked incorrect to me.

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 [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 11:41
Phew...I also chose B but thought I was wrong since everyone chose A. "as companies that compete one day" sounds incorrect and I don't think the usage of Whereas is correct here. Where is this question from?
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 [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 14:35
The sentence with the OA (B) reads thus:
Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies one day may be partners the next.
I don't think the highlighted part sounds like correct English, or I am missing something basic here. Ivymba or matrix, Help me out!
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 [#permalink] New post 12 Oct 2006, 20:03
Anand - I think the issue has to do with "compete." Competing is the best option here because it represents a non-finite clause. The companies are competing and will continue to compete in the future. Check out the below link which does a far better job explaining it:

http://www.onestopenglish.com/section.a ... cid=146364
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 [#permalink] New post 13 Oct 2006, 06:55
The definate article is required to appropriately complete the comparison.

For some reason, the GMAT prefers "although" over "whereas" constructions when illustrating contrast.
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 [#permalink] New post 13 Oct 2006, 09:20
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Anand - I think the issue has to do with "compete." Competing is the best option here because it represents a non-finite clause. The companies are competing and will continue to compete in the future. Check out the below link which does a far better job explaining it:

http://www.onestopenglish.com/section.a ... cid=146364


Thanks Matrix! Finally, I see the rationale now.
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 [#permalink] New post 16 Oct 2006, 13:40
"as competing industries one day may become.." ????

I still like A, "one day" doesn't make sense above
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Re: Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more [#permalink] New post 31 May 2014, 16:05
This is a GMATPrep question, and I just answered this question in my exam. The OA is A.
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Re: Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more [#permalink] New post 01 Jun 2014, 09:22
I too marked (B).

However while reviewing I analysed the structure as:

Whereas the lines of ....in X, in Y they are blurred...... (Somewhat correct ||ism, would be best if it had been as below:

Whereas the lines of... in X, those of... in Y are......

What is wrong with (B).

Companies that compete one day may be partners the next. (A), here that restricts the type of companies and compete one day partner other day.

Competing companies one day may be partners next. (B), here somewhat awkward.
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Re: Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2014, 12:29
Don't you think more established companies is equivocal.

What more ? quantity or quality.
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Re: Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2014, 21:01
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Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

A. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
B. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies
C. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete
D. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete
E. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies


A. Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete - correct
B. Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies - continuous tense, not preferable
C. The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete - has to be internet industry not INTERNET -> changes the meaning
D. Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete - Comparision of two different things. Establuished industries are compared with 'lines of competition'
E. Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies - same as D

IMO A
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