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While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and [#permalink]
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While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, owners of cooperative apartments have shares in a corporation that owns a building and leases apartments to them.
A. While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,
B. The owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, but
C. Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,
D. An owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, whereas
E. Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
23 May 2009, 21:38
A) While is unnecessary and does not fit.
B) "the" implies that there is only one, "an" would fit better
C) Whereas is improperly used, should never start a comparison
D) whereas is improperly used, should have a semicolon
Answer: E) the plural owners is more parallel. title to their dwelling THAT is free and clear displays the information more effectively than the others. the "while" doesn't show as effective of a comparison, but does show one. I would say it is the best choice.
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
24 May 2009, 08:05
I still think whereas is improperly used there.
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
24 May 2009, 08:21
"owners of condominium apartments" brings the parallelism.
I will go with C.
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
24 May 2009, 22:20
IMO C. 'Owners'.....'owners'
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
24 May 2009, 23:31
C looked the best from the paralleism view but he use of "Whereas" . Can some one explain?
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Re: Condomimium Apartment [#permalink]
25 May 2009, 00:19
OA is C I am pretty you can start statements with whereas. E. Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while Also error in E - it should be "Condominium apartment owners have title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while" - no "a" before title. che, dg
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