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While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, owners of cooperative apartments have shares in a corporation that owns a building and leases apartments to them.

A. While the owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling,

B. The owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, but

C. Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings,

D. An owner of a condominium apartment has free and clear title to the dwelling, whereas

E. Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while
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23 May 2009, 20:38
A) While is unnecessary and does not fit.
B) "the" implies that there is only one, "an" would fit better
C) Whereas is improperly used, should never start a comparison
D) whereas is improperly used, should have a semicolon

Answer: E) the plural owners is more parallel. title to their dwelling THAT is free and clear displays the information more effectively than the others. the "while" doesn't show as effective of a comparison, but does show one. I would say it is the best choice.
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24 May 2009, 07:05
I still think whereas is improperly used there.
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24 May 2009, 07:21
"owners of condominium apartments" brings the parallelism.

I will go with C.
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24 May 2009, 21:20
IMO C. 'Owners'.....'owners'
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24 May 2009, 22:31
C looked the best from the paralleism view but he use of "Whereas" . Can some one explain?
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24 May 2009, 23:19
OA is C

I am pretty you can start statements with whereas.

E. Condominium apartment owners have a title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while

Also error in E - it should be "Condominium apartment owners have title to their dwelling that is free and clear, while" - no "a" before title.

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