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25. With just several quick strokes of the pen, the monkeys were drawn by the artist, capturing their antics.
(A) the monkeys were drawn by the artist, capturing their antics

(B) the artist sketched the monkeys, capturing their antics

(C) the artist captured the antics of the monkeys, sketching them


(D) the artist sketched the monkeys and also capturing their antics


(E) the monkeys and their antics were sketched by the artist



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 [#permalink] New post 02 Sep 2006, 06:31
I think the answer is (B). A is absurd because it is passive and also is not parallel. "Them" in C could refer to anyone making the construction unclear. E is passive and D is not parallel.
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Sep 2006, 07:02
Mahidhar wrote:
I think the answer is (B). A is absurd because it is passive and also is not parallel. "Them" in C could refer to anyone making the construction unclear. E is passive and D is not parallel.


Additionally, this is a modifier SC. Monkeys can't write :wink:
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SC:monkeys [#permalink] New post 02 Sep 2006, 07:09
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Mahidhar wrote:
I think the answer is (B). A is absurd because it is passive and also is not parallel. "Them" in C could refer to anyone making the construction unclear. E is passive and D is not parallel.


Additionally, this is a modifier SC. Monkeys can't write :wink:


Yup, B seems like the best answer here for the same reasons. :)
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Sep 2006, 09:40
B is the best of the lot i agree.And it is the answer.
but isnt the phrase capturing their antics wrong.Shouldn't it be THUS capturing their antics or something along those lines
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Sep 2006, 23:45
sangarelli wrote:
but isnt the phrase capturing their antics wrong.Shouldn't it be THUS capturing their antics or something along those lines

:no
This is a typical modifier SC.

How about inverting the sentence in B:

Capturing their antics with just several quick strokes of the pen, the artist captured the antics of the monkeys.

It makes sense now???
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 [#permalink] New post 20 Jun 2007, 14:42
ps_dahiya wrote:
sangarelli wrote:
but isnt the phrase capturing their antics wrong.Shouldn't it be THUS capturing their antics or something along those lines

:no
This is a typical modifier SC.

How about inverting the sentence in B:

Capturing their antics with just several quick strokes of the pen, the artist captured the antics of the monkeys.

It makes sense now???


I also picked B. However, capturing their antics is separated by a comma and is a dependent clause that cannot stand alone. any insights?
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 [#permalink] New post 05 Sep 2007, 11:19
bmwhype2 wrote:
ps_dahiya wrote:
sangarelli wrote:
but isnt the phrase capturing their antics wrong.Shouldn't it be THUS capturing their antics or something along those lines

:no
This is a typical modifier SC.

How about inverting the sentence in B:

Capturing their antics with just several quick strokes of the pen, the artist captured the antics of the monkeys.

It makes sense now???


I also picked B. However, capturing their antics is separated by a comma and is a dependent clause that cannot stand alone. any insights?


particpial phrase modifying the noun, artists.
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