{"id":1165,"date":"2009-09-01T13:27:01","date_gmt":"2009-09-01T21:27:01","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=1165"},"modified":"2009-09-03T13:28:38","modified_gmt":"2009-09-03T21:28:38","slug":"personal-statement-tip-too-many-topics-too-many-words","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/personal-statement-tip-too-many-topics-too-many-words\/","title":{"rendered":"Personal Statement Tip: Too many topics, too many words"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I just got back from an almost two-week vacation crowned by our younger son\u2019s joyous wedding to a wonderful young woman. We couldn\u2019t be happier.<\/p>\n<p>My husband <a title=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/acceptedcom_blog\/2008\/2\/20\/personal-statement-tip-once-upon-a-time.html\" href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/acceptedcom_blog\/2008\/2\/20\/personal-statement-tip-once-upon-a-time.html\" target=\"_blank\">once again <\/a>faced the challenge of speaking at the wedding, and after the wedding commented on the difficulties inherent in covering a number of different topics (praise for the bride and groom and the bride\u2019s family, a little bit of fatherly advice for the young couple, thanks to the guests, and a good story to keep the audience engaged.) He struggled with it. In reviewing the events of the evening, he volunteered that he had weeded out the less important items on his agenda and strove to tie the disparate elements together into a coherent whole.<\/p>\n<p>My husband\u2019s comments reminded me (as usual) of the challenge many of you face when writing your essays, be they multi-part MBA essays, medical school secondaries with tight word limits, or an open-ended personal statement where you choose to cover more than one topic.<\/p>\n<p>Here are a few tips:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Eliminate the extraneous and the less important, but do cover all the sub-questions in a multi-part question.<\/li>\n<li>If the question is theoretical, remember that the application is about you. Try to ground your response with an example from your experience.<\/li>\n<li>Look for the common thread tying the parts together. 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