{"id":2573,"date":"2010-03-09T11:02:27","date_gmt":"2010-03-09T19:02:27","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=2573"},"modified":"2010-03-09T11:02:27","modified_gmt":"2010-03-09T19:02:27","slug":"from-example-to-exemplary-2-a-theme-for-your-statement-of-purpose","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/from-example-to-exemplary-2-a-theme-for-your-statement-of-purpose\/","title":{"rendered":"From Example to Exemplary #2: A Theme for Your Statement of Purpose"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Lesson #2 of a five-part series for drafting exemplary essays. <\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">All effective essays have a distinctive voice and theme. Referring back to the essays we looked at in \u201cIdentifying the Ingredients of a Winning Essay,\u201d we might say that our MPH candidate\u2019s theme was his passion for finding answers to significant public health issues. Our law school applicant\u2019s theme was her yearning for greater intellectual challenge while remaining in the health care field.<\/span><span style=\"color: windowtext\"> <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">It takes time and introspection to find your voice and your theme. The questions below are designed to stimulate your thought process and help you define your essay\u2019s main message. Your answers will also help you express your goals, values as they relate to your career choice, motivations for pursuing a graduate degree, and your professional dreams. While introspection isn\u2019t as popular an activity as, say, tennis or watching a favorite TV show, it\u2019s an important part of this process. Give it some time; your essay will be much better for it. <\/span><\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>Why      are you passionate about -- or at least committed to -- your career      choice?<\/li>\n<li>What experiences in your life (personal, educational, professional) have influenced your career goals and passions the most?<\/li>\n<li>Has      any individual played a major      role in helping you discover these goals      or values?<\/li>\n<li>What      do you hope to achieve in your career?<\/li>\n<li>What      would career success look like in ten years?<\/li>\n<li>What      strengths do you bring to this career?<\/li>\n<li>What      experiences can you write about that will highlight these strengths?<\/li>\n<li>After the admissions committee has read your essays, what three words would you hope they would use to describe you? Would you like them to consider you \u201cdriven,\u201d \u201cintelligent,\u201d and \u201ccreative?\u201d How about \u201cdedicated,\u201d \u201ca leader,\u201d and \u201cfocused?\u201d No matter what image you want to create, think about experiences that will illustrate those qualities.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">Some answers may spring to mind immediately, while others may require more thought. Some of these experiences might have enough drama or color to make a compelling essay introduction. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">Remember that if you are writing multiple essays, such as for MBA programs, each one must have its own theme. The admissions committee members want to see you as a multi-faceted individual. Do not hammer home the same theme repeatedly when you have the opportunity to display different aspects of yourself, your values, and your personality.<\/span><span style=\"color: windowtext\"> <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">Our next lesson will focus on developing the career goal essay. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">Summary Tips:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">1. Carve out some time for introspection about your career goals, values, and motivation.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: windowtext\">2. Develop distinct themes for each essay required for an MBA program, or for any program requiring more than one essay.<br \/>\n<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/aboutus\/editors.aspx?editorid=11\"><span class=\"full-image-inline ssNonEditable\"><\/span><\/a> By <\/em><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/aboutus\/editors.aspx?editorid=11\"><em>Judy Gruen<\/em><\/a><em>, Accepted.com editor and co-author of the ebook<\/em><em>, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/ecommerce\/MBA\/lettersofrecommendation.aspx\">MBA Letters of Recommendation That Rock<\/a>.<span style=\"font-style: normal\"><br \/>\n<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lesson #2 of a five-part series for drafting exemplary essays. All effective essays have a distinctive voice and theme. 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