{"id":27061,"date":"2015-01-07T15:16:09","date_gmt":"2015-01-07T22:16:09","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=27061"},"modified":"2015-01-07T15:16:09","modified_gmt":"2015-01-07T22:16:09","slug":"essay-tip-the-devil-is-in-the-details","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/essay-tip-the-devil-is-in-the-details\/","title":{"rendered":"Essay Tip: The Devil is in the Details"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure id=\"attachment_27062\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-27062\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2013\/06\/23\/what-is-an-accomplishment-2\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-27062\" alt=\"Trumpet your accomplishments loud and clear!\" src=\"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/01\/victory-300x300.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/01\/victory-300x300.jpg 300w, https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/01\/victory-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/01\/victory.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-27062\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Don't hide your achievements; trumpet them loudly and clearly!<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>You can argue about the devil, but certainly the substance, distinctiveness, and success of your\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/grad\/personal-statement.aspx\">essays<\/a>\u00a0depends on the details.<\/p>\n<p>Many applicants tend to bury their uniqueness and success under vague assertions. You don\u2019t want to hide\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2013\/06\/23\/what-is-an-accomplishment-2\/\">your achievements<\/a>; you want to trumpet them loudly and clearly. For instance, if you led a team working on a software development project, was it a three-member team or a thirty-member, cross-functional team with representatives from five different divisions and two continents? Was the potential market for the product $5 million or $200 million? Did you launch the product on time and in budget? Did it zoom to the top of the market-share charts? The details reveal the level of your responsibility, the confidence others have in your abilities based on their prior experience with you, and the significance of your accomplishment.<\/p>\n<p>What about your\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2013\/04\/11\/does-extracurricular-equal-extra-credit\/\">volunteer work<\/a>? Do you simply \u201cvolunteer\u201d? If you do, you aren\u2019t saying anything distinctive or substantive. Are you an EMT working five hours per week? Do you volunteer at a legal aid clinic? What have you seen or experienced? What have you learned? Have you launched a bereavement group in a country where such services were previously unheard of? What were the challenges you overcame to establish that group? What did you learn from the experience? How has it influenced you?<\/p>\n<p>You may ask, \u201cHow can I fit all these details into a short essay?\u201d Good question. Include many of the specifics in the work history sections \u2014\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2010\/05\/24\/application-boxes-should-do-the-heavy-lifting\/\">the boxes<\/a>\u00a0\u2014 of the application or in an attached resume if allowed. Then in the essay, provide enough detail to provide context and create interest. Balance your profound insight and reflection with devilishly dazzling detail.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/reports.accepted.com\/top-mba-essay-tips?utm_campaign=blogcta&amp;utm_medium=MBAEssayTipsReport&amp;utm_source=CTA\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"How can you show the adcom that you will be a leader in the future? Click here to find out!\" src=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/leadership-in-admissions1.jpg\" width=\"350\" height=\"130\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><em><em>\"Accepted.com's\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/aboutus\/AboutUs.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">experienced admissions consultants<\/a>\u00a0can help you create the most impressive application possible with\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/Services\/MBAProgramServices.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">comprehensive packages<\/a>,<b><i>\u00a0<\/i><\/b>or provide targeted assistance from\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/services\/mba\/admissionsconsulting.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">picking perfect programs<\/a>\u00a0to\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/mba\/admissionsresume.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">designing a dazzling resume<\/a>,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/mba\/essayediting.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">constructing engaging essays<\/a>, or\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/mba\/interviewservices.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">preparing for intense interview<\/a><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/mba\/interviewservices.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">s<\/a>\u2026and more! Accepted.com has guided thousands of applicants to acceptances at top MBA programs since 1994 \u2013 we know what works and what doesn't, so\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/contactus.aspx\" target=\"_blank\">contact us<\/a>\u00a0to get started now!<\/p>\n<p>This article originally appeared on the <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2015\/01\/07\/essay-tip-the-devil-is-in-the-details\/\" target=\"_blank\">Accepted Admissions Consulting Blog<\/a>, the official blog of <a href=\"www.Accepted.com\" target=\"_blank\">Accepted.com<\/a><\/em><\/em><\/p>\n<div>\u200b\u200bRelated Resources:<\/div>\n<p>\u2022\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/info.accepted.com\/personal-statement-flaws\">5 Fatal Flaws To Avoid<\/a><br \/>\n\u2022\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2014\/08\/10\/6-tips-for-getting-started-on-your-application-essays-2\/\">6 Tips for Getting Started on Your Application Essays\u00a0<\/a><br \/>\n\u2022\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2013\/09\/22\/personal-statement-tip-story-time\/\">Personal Statement Tip: Story Time<\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You can argue about the devil, but certainly the substance, distinctiveness, and success of your\u00a0essays\u00a0depends on the details. 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