{"id":32986,"date":"2016-05-08T12:14:49","date_gmt":"2016-05-08T19:14:49","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=32986"},"modified":"2016-07-27T15:37:01","modified_gmt":"2016-07-27T22:37:01","slug":"10-tips-for-better-essay-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/10-tips-for-better-essay-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"10 Tips for Better Essay Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure id=\"attachment_39123\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-39123\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"https:\/\/info.accepted.com\/example-to-exemplary\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-39123 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/05\/Writing-tips-for-essays.png\" alt=\"Learn by example and download our free guide \" width=\"300\" height=\"197\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-39123\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><\/p>\n<p><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Time to brush up on your basic writing skills!<\/p>\n<p><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Want to show the adcom that you are a master of the written word, someone who knows how to convey their thoughtful experiences and insightful ideas eloquently? Then it's time you brush up on your basic writing skills with the following 10 tips:<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>1.<\/strong> Express yourself in positive language. Say what is, not what is not.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>2.<\/strong> Use transitions between paragraphs to tie one paragraph to the next. A transition can be a word, like \"later,\" \"furthermore,\" \"additionally,\" or \"moreover\"; a phrase like \"After this incident...\"; or an entire sentence. If you are writing about Topic A and now want to discuss Topic B, you can begin the new paragraph with a transition such as \"Like (or unlike) Topic A, Topic B...\"<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>3.<\/strong> Vary your sentence structure. It's boring to see subject, verb, object all the time. Mix simple, complex, and compound sentences.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>4.<\/strong> Understand the words you write. You write to communicate, not to impress the admissions staff with your vocabulary. When you choose a word that means something other than what you intend, you neither communicate nor impress. You do convey the wrong message or convince the admissions officer that you are inarticulate.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>5.<\/strong> Look up synonyms in a thesaurus when you use the same word repeatedly. After the DELETE key, the thesaurus is your best friend. As long as you follow Tip 4, using one will make your writing more interesting.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>6.<\/strong> Be succinct. Compare the following sentences:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 During my sophomore and junior years, there was significant development of my maturity and markedly improved self-discipline towards school work.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 During my sophomore and junior years, I matured and my self-discipline improved tremendously.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The first example takes many more words to give the same information. The admissions officers are swamped; they do not want to spend more time than necessary reading your essay. Say what you have to say in as few words as possible. Tips 7, 8, and 9 will help you to further implement this suggestion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>7.<\/strong> Make every word count. Do not repeat yourself. Each sentence and every word should state something new.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>8.<\/strong> Avoid qualifiers such as\u00a0rather,\u00a0quite,\u00a0somewhat,\u00a0probably, possibly, etc. Compare the following sentences:<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 You might improve your writing somewhat if you sometimes try to follow this suggestion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 Deleting unnecessary qualifiers will strengthen your writing 1000%.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">Nobody would be convinced of anything after reading that first sentence. Equivocating reveals a lack of confidence. If you do not believe what you write, why should the admissions officer?<\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>9.<\/strong> Use the active voice. Compare these two sentences:<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 The application was sent by the student.\u00a0(Passive voice)<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">\u2022 The student sent the application.\u00a0(Active voice)<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Both of these sentences communicate the same information. The active voice, however, is more concise; it specifies who is performing the action and what the object is. The passive voice is wordier and frequently less clear.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"><strong>10.<\/strong> Read and reread\u00a0<\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Elements of Style\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White. Containing basic rules of grammar, punctuation, composition, and style, this indispensable classic is available in paperback and is only 85 pages long.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Failing to follow these basic writing rules may make you appear sloppy or cast doubts about your communication skills \u2013 two things you want to avoid at all costs when trying to make a good first impression.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Need more help? Our consultants will make sure that your essays display your communication skills at their best \u2013 without you going cross-eyed reviewing them over and over and over. See how Accepted can\u00a0critique and polish\u00a0your essays when you check out our\u00a0<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/services\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">admissions consulting and application services<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\/testimonials\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">But don't take our word for it, read what our clients have said about Accepted.<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/info.accepted.com\/example-to-exemplary?utm_campaign=gmatclub&amp;utm_medium=exampletoexemplary&amp;utm_source=blogcta\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/cdn2.hubspot.net\/hubfs\/58291\/GMat_club_1.jpg\" alt=\"From Example to Exemplary - Download your guide today!\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.accepted.com\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-37267 alignnone\" src=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/02\/accepted_admissions_consultancy.jpg\" alt=\"Accepted - The Premier Admissions Consultancy\" width=\"429\" height=\"86\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>Related Resources:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">\u2022 <a href=\"https:\/\/reports.accepted.com\/five-fatal-flaws-grad-school-statement-of-purpose\">Five Fatal Flaws to Avoid\u00a0in Your Applications<\/a>, free guide<br \/>\n\u2022 <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2015\/07\/29\/the-4-must-haves-of-a-grad-school-application\/\">The 4 Must-Haves Of A Grad School Application<\/a>, a podcast episode<br \/>\n\u2022 <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2015\/12\/29\/application-essay-cliches-to-avoid\/\">What Applicants Should Not Do in 2016<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/2016\/05\/05\/10-tips-better-writing\/\">This article<\/a> <em>originally appeared on\u00a0<\/em><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.accepted.com\/\">blog.accepted.com<\/a><em>.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Applying to a top b-school? The talented folks at Accepted have helped hundreds of applicants get accepted to their dream programs. Whether you are figuring out where apply, writing your application essays, or prepping for your interviews, we are just a call (or click) away.<\/p>\n<p>Contact us, and get matched up with the consultant who will help\u00a0<em>you\u00a0<\/em><a href=\"https:\/\/hubs.ly\/H01gxJF0\">get accepted<\/a>!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Want to show the adcom that you are a master of the written word, someone who knows how to convey their thoughtful experiences and insightful ideas eloquently? 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