{"id":42116,"date":"2018-06-18T10:00:31","date_gmt":"2018-06-18T17:00:31","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=42116"},"modified":"2018-06-12T12:17:23","modified_gmt":"2018-06-12T19:17:23","slug":"stanford-graduate-school-of-business-essay-analysis-2018-2019","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/stanford-graduate-school-of-business-essay-analysis-2018-2019\/","title":{"rendered":"Stanford Graduate School of Business Essay Analysis, 2018\u20132019"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"entry\">\n<p>If we were to choose an MBA essay question that we felt could be considered iconic, it would certainly be the Stanford Graduate School of Business (GSB) mainstay \u201cWhat matters most to you, and why?\u201d For at least two decades, the program has asked this question, slightly tweaking the wording and word count over time, but always maintaining its spirit. We waited to see if the school might ultimately make a change this year, but the admissions committee clearly feels it is getting exactly what it needs out of candidates\u2019 essay responses. The GSB has likewise made no changes to its somewhat standard \u201cWhy Stanford?\u201d prompt (or its maximum word count allowance of 1,150 for the two essays combined). Our analysis of both follows. . .<\/p>\n<p><strong>Essay A: What matters most to you, and why?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>For this essay, we would like you to:<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Do some deep self-examination, so you can genuinely illustrate who you are and how you came to be the person you are.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li><strong>Share the insights, experiences, and lessons that shaped your perspectives, rather than focusing merely on what you\u2019ve done or accomplished.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li><strong>Write from the heart, and illustrate how a person, situation, or event has influenced you.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li><strong>Focus on the \u201cwhy\u201d rather than the \u201cwhat.\u201d<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>When candidates ask us, \u201cWhat should I write for what matters most to me?,\u201d we offer some pretty simple guidance: start brainstorming for this essay by asking yourself that very question. What\u00a0<em>does<\/em>\u00a0matter most to you? This might seem like obvious advice, of course, but many applicants get flustered by the question, believing that an actual \u201cright\u201d answer exists that they must provide to satisfy the admissions committee. As a result, they never pause to actually consider their sincere responses, which are typically the most compelling.<\/p>\n<p>We therefore encourage you to contemplate this question in depth and push yourself to explore the psychological and philosophical motivations behind your goals and achievements\u2014behind who you are today. We cannot emphasize this enough: do not make a snap decision about the content of this essay. Once you have identified what you believe is an appropriate theme, discuss your idea(s) with those with whom you are closest and whose input you respect. Doing so can help validate deeply personal and authentic themes, leading to an essay that truly stands out.<\/p>\n<p>Once you have fully examined your options and identified your main themes, do not simply provide a handful of supporting anecdotes\u2014or worse, recycle the stories you used in a similar essay for another school. A strong essay response to this question will involve a true exploration of the themes you have chosen and reveal a thorough analysis of decisions, motives, and successes\/failures, with a constant emphasis on\u00a0<em>how<\/em>\u00a0you conduct yourself. If you are merely telling stories and trying to tie in your preconceived conclusions, you are probably forcing a theme on your reader rather than genuinely analyzing your experiences, and any experienced admissions reader will see right through this. In short, be sure to fully consider and identify your most authentic answer(s), outline your essay accordingly, and then infuse your writing with your personality, thoughts, feelings, and experiences.<\/p>\n<p>Stanford encourages you to give special attention to\u00a0<em>why<\/em>\u00a0the subject you have chosen to write about is the most important to you. This \u201cwhy\u201d element should be clear in your essay\u2014it should be implied by what you are discussing and sharing. If you need to explicitly declare, \u201cAnd what matters most to me is\u2026,\u201d your essay is not making a strong enough point on its own. A well-constructed essay that is infused with your values and motivation and that clearly conveys why you made certain decisions should effectively and implicitly reveal the \u201cwhy\u201d behind your chosen topic\u2014and will almost always make a stronger point.<\/p>\n<p>One final note is that you\u00a0<em>can<\/em>\u00a0write about a popular theme as long as you truly\u00a0<em>own<\/em>\u00a0the experience. However, the odds are very low that you could write on a theme that the Stanford GSB\u2019s admissions committee has never read about before. You can discuss whatever you truly care about in your essay, but you absolutely\u00a0<em>must<\/em>\u00a0support your topic with a wealth of experience that shows how you have uniquely\u00a0<em>lived<\/em>\u00a0it. Therefore, for example, you cannot successfully write about \u201cmaking a difference\u201d if you have volunteered only occasionally, but if you have\u00a0<em>truly<\/em>\u00a0had a significant impact on someone\u2019s life, then the topic is no longer a clich\u00e9\u2014it is true to who you genuinely are. So, focus less on trying to choose the \u201cright\u201d subject for your essay and more on identifying one that is personal and authentic to you. If you write powerfully about your topic and connect it directly to your experiences and values, your essay should be a winner.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Essay B: Why Stanford?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>Enlighten us on how earning your MBA at Stanford will enable you to realize your ambitions.<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Explain your decision to pursue graduate education in management.<\/strong><\/li>\n<li><strong>Explain the distinctive opportunities you will pursue at Stanford.<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>On the application essays page of the Stanford GSB website, the admissions committee states forthrightly, \u201cResist the urge to \u2018package\u2019 yourself into\u00a0<em>what\u00a0you think<\/em>\u00a0Stanford wants to see\u201d (emphasis added). What the school\u00a0<em>really<\/em>\u00a0wants is to understand what and\/or who you want to be and what role its MBA program plays in bringing that to fruition. The admissions committee does not have a preferred job or industry in mind that it is waiting to hear you say you plan to enter\u2014it truly wants to understand your personal vision and why you feel a Stanford MBA in particular is a necessary element to facilitate this vision. If you try to present yourself as someone or something you are not, you will ultimately undermine your candidacy. Trust the admissions committee (and us) on this one!<\/p>\n<p>The \u201cwhy our school?\u201d topic is a common element of a typical personal statement, so we encourage you to download your\u00a0<em>free<\/em>\u00a0copy of the\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.mbamission.com\/products\/personal-statement-guide\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">mbaMission Personal Statement Guide<\/a><\/strong>, which helps applicants write this style of essay for any school. It explains ways of approaching this subject effectively and offers several sample essays as guides.\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.mbamission.com\/products\/personal-statement-guide\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Click here<\/a><\/strong>to access your complimentary copy today.<\/p>\n<p>And for a thorough exploration of the Stanford GSB\u2019s academic program, unique offerings, social life, and other key characteristics, check out the\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.mbamission.com\/products\/stanford-graduate-school-of-business-insider-s-guide\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">mbaMission Insider\u2019s Guide to the Stanford Graduate School of Business<\/a><\/strong>, which is also available for free.<\/p>\n<p><em><strong>The Next Step\u2014Mastering Your Stanford GSB Interview:\u00a0<\/strong><\/em>Many MBA candidates find admissions interviews stressful and intimidating, but mastering this important element of the application process is definitely possible\u2014the key is informed preparation. And, on your way to this high level of preparation, we offer our\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.mbamission.com\/collections\/interview-primers\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">free Interview Primers<\/a><\/strong>\u00a0to spur you along! Download your free copy of the\u00a0<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.mbamission.com\/products\/stanford-gsb-interview-primer\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Stanford GSB Interview Primer<\/a><\/strong>\u00a0today.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>If we were to choose an MBA essay question that we felt could be considered iconic, it would certainly be the Stanford Graduate School of Business (GSB) mainstay \u201cWhat matters&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":126,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[368,63,11,3,4,6,8,1,872,775,113,10,243,766],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-42116","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-mobile-blog","category-books","category-mba","category-b-school-life","category-career-reviews","category-current-events","category-fun-stuff","category-uncategorized","category-mbamission","category-admission-consultants","category-applications","category-interviews","category-blog","category-top-stories","entry"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/42116","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/126"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=42116"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/42116\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":42117,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/42116\/revisions\/42117"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=42116"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=42116"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=42116"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}