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Editor\u2019s Note:<\/em>\u00a0<\/em>I\u2019m Brian Fobi, founder of <\/em>Gurufi.com<\/em><\/a>, where my team and I help applicants craft compelling, authentic MBA and graduate-school essays. At Gurufi, we help clients \u201cun-AI\u201d their essays, but for people who can\u2019t afford our services, we\u2019re writing this series of free blog posts with tips, pitfalls to avoid, and insights I\u2019ve gained from helping MBA applicants for the last 19 years.<\/em><\/p>\n

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In the first part of this series<\/a>, I discussed the danger you put yourself in if you use A.I. to write your personal statement. TLDR: schools are now far better equipped to detect inauthentic or machine-generated work and for the first time, they\u2019re all expressing that they\u2019re worried about this. But even if detection didn\u2019t exist, even if no one ever checked, there\u2019s a deeper reason why you shouldn\u2019t use AI to write your personal statement: they create crappy essays.<\/p>\n

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They\u2019re not good. They are not personal. They are not insightful. They are not you.<\/strong><\/p>\n

When a Personal Statement works, it feels like the reader has met you. You\u2019re on the page; I know what you value, and I get a sense of your personality. A great personal statement illuminates who you are as a thinker, a leader, a colleague, and a human being. They\u2019re supposed to reflect the hard work of clarifying your values, your mistakes, your growth, your ambitions, and the inflection points that shaped you. AI cannot supply any of that.<\/p>\n

Let\u2019s dive into why.<\/p>\n

AI Is Designed to Produce \u201cAverage,\u201d Not Exceptional, Writing<\/strong><\/p>\n

A common misconception is that AI produces strong writing because the surface-level polish is so clean. No grammatical errors, clear structure, relatively sophisticated vocabulary\u2026 that\u2019s a great essay, right? Well, for many applicants, AI-generated text feels<\/em> like \u201cgood writing.\u201d But here\u2019s the uncomfortable truth that most people don\u2019t realize: AI is engineered to generate statistically average text.<\/strong><\/p>\n

Large language models are not trained to write the most original, insightful, or emotionally rich response. They are trained to predict the next most likely word, given everything they\u2019ve seen before. The result is a polished but generic essay that mirrors thousands of other essays written by applicants with the same goals, aspirations, and experiences. By definition, and through the structures of these algorithms, AI creates average, forgettable essays.<\/p>\n

In the course of doing the GMATClub<\/a> MBA Podcast<\/a>, I\u2019ve spoken with admissions officers from most of the top schools, and while some remain a bit guarded about their exact techniques for AI-detection, what they all say is that admissions officers can detect AI-produced writing from a mile away. They\u2019ll tell you that AI essays sound\u00a0smooth<\/em>\u00a0but\u00a0empty<\/em>; they \u201ccheck all the boxes\u201d but say nothing new; they lack genuine vulnerability or specificity; and they feel formulaic, even when they are technically correct. It's oatmeal, unbuttered toast, unseasoned chicken. You forget about these bland, indistinguishable, and rote essays<\/strong> the moment you put them down.<\/strong><\/p>\n

The core reason is that AI is a powerful tool that offers shortcuts for tedious, repetitive work. But, most of the important work for a personal statement comes before<\/em> you begin typing out your first draft. At their core, these essays want to know who you are as a leader, and why? What experiences shaped your goals? What motivates your professional trajectory? How have your successes and failures taught you something real?<\/p>\n

To get at these questions, you need to do some hard thinking. It requires reflection, self-examination, and the kind of uncomfortable assessments about your life and goals that an AI can\u2019t do. When I work with clients, I urge them to do some brainstorming exercises that are designed to produce insights<\/a> that you may not have previously known you had<\/a>!<\/p>\n

Admissions officers don\u2019t want a well-crafted paragraph. They want evidence that\u00a0you\u2019ve thought deeply<\/strong>\u00a0about your purpose, your direction, and your identity. Without that work, even the prettiest writing collapses under scrutiny.<\/p>\n

The Process Matters: Reflection Produces Your Best Material<\/strong><\/p>\n

The most damaging misconception about AI in essay writing is the belief that the final text is what matters most. It\u2019s not. The\u00a0process<\/em>\u00a0of thinking\u2014really thinking!!!\u2014about your story is what unlocks the insights that separate winning essays from the rest.<\/p>\n

When clients come to us for help with their essays<\/a>, the most important work is not the writing itself; it\u2019s digging into their story, asking pointed questions, and putting them in a spot that forces them to think beyond their prepared, canned answers. That\u2019s where the gold is!<\/p>\n

We recognize that not everybody can afford our services, and if that\u2019s you, please check out the video about brainstorming above. When I work with clients one-on-one it\u2019s the thing that they often express the most skepticism about, but afterward it\u2019s what they said helped their essays the most! In addition, before you start writing, also grab a notebook and just sketch some ideas for the following questions, as the answers your produce for yourself<\/strong> will often help you to craft a compelling personal statement:<\/p>\n