{"id":7774,"date":"2011-07-05T14:52:07","date_gmt":"2011-07-05T22:52:07","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/?p=7774"},"modified":"2011-07-05T14:52:43","modified_gmt":"2011-07-05T22:52:43","slug":"three-crucial-sentence-correction-strategies","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gmatclub.com\/blog\/three-crucial-sentence-correction-strategies\/","title":{"rendered":"Three Crucial Sentence Correction Strategies"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Of all the question types on the GMAT,\u00a0 Sentence Correction may seem the most arbitrary to  prospective examinees.\u00a0 Math we get: nearly all MBA graduates will have  to make decisions using numbers and nearly all MBA programs require  coursework in areas like finance and accounting for which some baseline  math skills are important.\u00a0 Similarly, reading comprehension is  something that any school would want to ensure its students can do  effectively, and the logic behind critical reasoning makes a lot of  sense, too: schools and employers want people who can think logically  and make reasoned decisions.<\/p>\n<p>But English grammar?\u00a0 Why would schools like INSEAD and ESADE, located  in countries where English is not an official language and attracting  students from all corners of the globe, be concerned with English  grammar subtleties?\u00a0 Especially when, as about 1\/3 of the verbal  section, sentence correction counts for about 17% of someone\u2019s GMAT  score.\u00a0 It\u2019s probably nice to know that everyone can speak the same  language, but 17% of someone\u2019s entry value?\u00a0 Isn\u2019t that overkill?<\/p>\n<p>That should be a clue to you that Sentence Correction is <em>not about the grammar<\/em>! Sentence Correction  exists to test your decision making abilities first and foremost, and  does so by taking a common and much-shallower-than-you\u2019d-think pool of  skills and knowledge and using that as a basis to test your higher-order  thinking.\u00a0 Knowing that is a great first step toward successful study  and performance on Sentence Correction questions.\u00a0 These three essential  strategies should take you even further:<\/p>\n<p><strong>1) Make Logic Your Primary Focus<\/strong><br \/>\nThe single-most crucial type of Sentence Correction error,  Modifiers, Comparisons, and Verb Tenses all share one thing in common:  you do not need to be an expert editor to recognize that this sentence is  illogical!\u00a0 The introductory phrase in this sentence, \u201cthe single-most  type\u2026\u201d is clearly meant to describe one item, but the rest of the  sentence lists three.\u00a0 This does not make logical sense!\u00a0 Technically  you\u2019d call this a modifier error, in that the modifying phrase to begin  the sentence \u2013 recognizable because it begins the sentence, is separated  by a comma, and does not include its own subject and verb (note: these  aren\u2019t essential characteristics of any modifier, but they are one  surefire way to identify a commonly-occurring type of modifier in which  SC errors often crop up) \u2013 does not logically modify the noun that  follows.<\/p>\n<p>If you want to get really technical, it\u2019s an appositive modifier (a noun  phrase used to describe another noun), but the GMAT will never require  you to describe the grammatical\u00a0 terminology behind it. If you can  recognize that \u201cthis is wrong \u2013 logically it doesn\u2019t make sense\u201d, you  can eliminate this answer choice and move on.\u00a0 Consider this example, often mistaken by students as  incorrect:<\/p>\n<p><em>In order to break the world record in the 100 meter dash at next  summer\u2019s Olympics, Tyson Gay will need to run faster than Usain Bolt ran  at the 2009 World Championships.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Many a GMAT student has looked at a sentence like this and viewed the  comparison as incorrect, citing \u201cparallelism\u201d as their primary concern.\u00a0  \u201cYou cannot compare a future tense verb to a past-tense verb\u2026they\u2019re  not perfectly parallel!\u201d they\u2019ll claim.\u00a0 But, again, ask yourself about  the logic: is there any logical way to put these two actions in the same  tense? From where we\u2019re standing today, \u201cnext summer\u2019s Olympics\u201d must  be in the future, and 2009 must be in the past.\u00a0 We simply cannot put  them in the same verb tense.\u00a0 For comparisons, the two items must be  logically comparable, but they need not be perfectly parallel to the  umpteenth grammatical degree.\u00a0 This sentence is wrong:<\/p>\n<p><em>In order to break the world record next summer, Tyson Gay\u2019s time will need to be faster than Usain Bolt at the 2009 worlds.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Here we are comparing Gay\u2019s time to Bolt, the person, and this isn\u2019t a  logical comparison. Remember, logic is your primary goal on these  questions, so look for clearly illogical modifiers, sequences,  comparisons, etc. and you\u2019ll nearly always be able to avoid having to  dig that much deeper for grammatical jargon or expertise.\u00a0 If the words  \u201cgerund\u201d and \u201cparticiple\u201d aren\u2019t currently part of your vocabulary, you  probably don\u2019t need them to be when you take the test, either.<\/p>\n<p><strong>2) Recognize Decision Points<\/strong><br \/>\nAs stated above, the pool of required grammar knowledge for the GMAT is  likely shallower than you would think; those who memorize hundreds of  idiomatic rules or read the cover off of their copy of Strunk &amp;  White\u2019s \u201cElements of Style\u201d are studying counter to the real purpose of  the GMAT\u2019s inclusion of Sentence Correction: the idea of \u201ccore  competencies.\u201d\u00a0 Corporate Strategy courses in business school\u00a0 will spend a lot of time on that notion that each business needs to recognize the  handful of things it does extremely well and find opportunities to  leverage that.\u00a0 When businesses stray from their core competencies they  tend to struggle mightily, wasting resources and providing diminishing  returns with increased risk.<\/p>\n<p>For example, McDonald\u2019s has a set of core competencies that allow it to  run efficient fast-food operations in high-traffic areas.\u00a0  It\u2019s natural, then, to acquire Chipotle and replicate the same processes  with a different type of fast food; if McDonald\u2019s were to try to  distribute its products through the frozen foods aisles at grocery  stores, however, it might find that it is ill-equipped to compete with  that different set of core competencies.\u00a0 Businesses specialize, and as a  potential Master of Business you should specialize, too.\u00a0 Do not try to  memorize everything there is to know about grammar; learn to recognize  the common GMAT decision points and you can efficiently make the  decisions that you have trained yourself to make effectively.<\/p>\n<p>Verbs make fantastic decision points, as they are involved in  subject-verb agreement errors, verb tense errors, and comparison errors  (are we comparing an action to an action?).\u00a0 Pronouns also lend  themselves well to decisions, as they can disagree in number or they can  fail to refer to anything specific.\u00a0 When you look at the answer  choices of a sentence and see the same verb in different forms or a  choice between singular and plural pronouns, you should immediately  identify those as classic decision points and look to make your choices  there.\u00a0 Similarly, as comparisons are often tested on the GMAT, the  presence of pronouns like \u201cthat of\u201d or \u201cthose of\u201d should indicate that  you need to decide whether the comparison requires such a possessive:<\/p>\n<p>The question of whether to allocate a portion of their salaries to  retirement plans is particularly troublesome for recent college  graduates, whose salaries are typically lower than  senior members of companies; with the rising cost of living, younger  employees often struggle with having to pay bills while trying to save  for the long run.<\/p>\n<p>A) than<br \/>\nB) than those      of<br \/>\nC) than is so      of<br \/>\nD) compared to<br \/>\nE) compared to      those of<\/p>\n<p>Here, the presence of \u201cthose of\u201d in B and E should tip you off \u2013 we need  to determine whether we are comparing X with Y or something that  belongs to X with \u201cthose of\u201d Y.\u00a0 Going back to the sentence, we see that  we are comparing \u201csalaries\u201d belonging to recent graduates to\u2026 \u201csenior  members of companies\u201d.\u00a0 Which is illogical\u2014 we can\u2019t compare salaries to  people; it has to be salaries to \u201cthose of\u201d the other people.\u00a0 So we  must have either B or E.\u00a0 E is redundant \u2014 \u201clower\u201d already tells us that  we\u2019re comparing, so adding \u201ccompared to\u201d just adds unnecessary words,  and so B is the correct answer.<\/p>\n<p>Knowing that \u201cthose of\u201d triggers an important decision point, you can  avoid reading most of this sentence \u2013 you know what you\u2019re looking for  and you can quickly dive into that decision, saving valuable time for  later problems on the test.<\/p>\n<p><strong>3) Lighten Your Load<\/strong><br \/>\nSentence Correction questions can include up to 54 words, making for  incredibly long sentences and time consuming reading.\u00a0 But similar to  point 2, knowing what is likely to be a testable section of a sentence  and what is not, you can break apart the sentence into the parts that  matter to you as a test-taker.\u00a0 Proper nouns, correctly-applied  modifiers, adjectives and adverbs can all be streamlined to make for  shorter sentences.\u00a0 For example, in the sentence:<\/p>\n<p><em>Originally called BackRub, Google was founded by two Stanford PhD  students, Larry Page, whose father, Dr. Carl Victor Page, was a computer  science professor at Michigan State University, and Sergey Brin. <\/em><\/p>\n<p>The proper nouns and excessive adjectives can be eliminated or condensed, bringing you down to:<\/p>\n<p><em>Originally called BackRub, Google was founded by two students, Larry, whose father, Carl, was a professor, and Sergey. <\/em><\/p>\n<p>Now it\u2019s easier to check the modifiers to make sure they\u2019re aptly  describing each portion of the sentence.\u00a0 \u201cOriginally called BackRub\u201d  can logically modify Google, so we can break off that part of the  sentence\u2026 There\u2019s nothing else that can be wrong with that option.<\/p>\n<p><em>Google was founded by two students, Larry, whose father, Carl, was a professor, and Sergey. <\/em><\/p>\n<p>\u201cwhose father\u201d logically modifies \u201cLarry;\u201d \u201cCarl\u201d logically modifies  \u201cfather,\u201d and \u201cLarry and Sergey\u201d logically modifies \u201cstudents,\u201d so we  can confirm that this sentence is correct.\u00a0 More importantly, as there  are four other answer choices that are similarly structured, we can more  quickly ascertain the decision points by looking at a shorter sentence,  making our work significantly easier and quicker.\u00a0 Again, this relates  to a business skill \u2013 if you can identify which items are superfluous  and which are the most important opportunities to add value, you can be a  much more efficient manager and a more valuable asset.<\/p>\n<p>Sentence Correction may seem a bit out-of-place on a graduate management  exam, but that should be a clue to you. Assuming that the GMAT is a  well-written test, the inclusion of Sentence Correction must be to test  something other than the type of grammar that you can easily fix with a  right-click of the green underline in your word processor.\u00a0 Sentence  Correction tests your ability to efficiently assess a  more-complicated-than-necessary situation, identify your core  competencies, and efficiently make decisions that play to your  strengths.\u00a0 Use that knowledge and these above strategies and you can  demonstrate those abilities to business schools and employers alike.<\/p>\n<p>Ready to sign up for a GMAT course ? Enroll through GMAT Club and save           up  to $180 (use discount  code GMATC10)! 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