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# A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States

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A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize
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30 Aug 2006, 08:13
Though B is closer, I will go for C for ll

A rep contends that employers who offer benefits that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize .

other options A, D and E are wordy and not right
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30 Aug 2006, 08:21
Yeah going with C here.. "permit to balance" correct..
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30 Aug 2006, 08:32
also employers who offer benefits .....will realize(C)
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30 Aug 2006, 09:30
C i correct in my opinion..idiom is benefits that permit...
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A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing (OUT - because it needs a verb not a participle)
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize (Close - but which is non restrictive )
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize (Correct, "that" implies a restrictive clause, has the correct verb form - will realize)
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing (OUT - because it needs a verb not a participle)
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize (OUT, who are "they", such that is awkward too)
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30 Aug 2006, 13:11
notice how "better balance" and "to balance better" have different meaning

PERMIT employees TO balance

C here
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30 Aug 2006, 22:07
good work guys
OA is C
thanks to everyone
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31 Aug 2006, 08:42
Yurik79 wrote:
good work guys
OA is C
thanks to everyone

Yurik, here's a quick hint for G-Day.

"which" almost always has a comma before it (99.9%)

Ex: Yurik's upcoming GMAT, which we are all aware of...
31 Aug 2006, 08:42
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