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I think AjiteshArun makes some excellent points above. I'll add that "it" in D and E is more than unnecessary; it makes the two options immediately wrong. I wouldn't bother to consider meaning in these choices because I'd already have knocked them out on an initial scan. The clause "it knocked . . . " can't be parallel to either "brightened" or "brightening."

I agree that some have been too quick to assume that the intended meaning is clear. Having said that, if the first 3 choices all convey the same meaning AND if that meaning is not clearly flawed, we're not likely to see a new meaning show up as correct. It's not quite as simple as majority rule or "stick with the meaning of A"--both of those can go wrong--but we are trying to use all 5 choices to see what the intended meaning is, and that's little reason to depart from the meaning in A-C. On examination, it makes more sense, and then when you notice that D-E lose the part about the Sun, you can be quite confident that the meaning is off.
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This is a case of cause and effect.

We need -ing modifiers and not -ed modifiers (past participles show intention but in this case, brightening and knocking are not intentional)

A. Brightened - wrong
B. Brightened - wrong
D. Brightened - wrong
E. Knocked - wrong
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Hi experts,

I read this question many times/the explanations on GMATCLUB. Unfortunately, I am still having a hard time wrapping my head around the subjecting being a large storm or an expanding cloud of energized particles... isolating this issue from the other flaws in the incorrect answer choices. I like Choice D except for the "it" at the end. Any further clarification on my conundrum would be greatly appreciated. Many thanks!
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Easiest way to solve this question is to look at the end. Only C is parallel
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I wonder how GMAT treats information deleted from choices, for e.g. D and E, Completely remove "from the sun"? - The OG Explanation or D does say "The info. that the cloud particles were from the sun is lost", so it does seem they care about it.

But I would love it if experts can weigh in, and share how GMAT treats other similar sentences and if missing info is a red flag or if it can be acceptable under the right circumstances.

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I wonder how GMAT treats information deleted from choices, for e.g. D and E, Completely remove "from the sun"? - The OG Explanation or D does say "The info. that the cloud particles were from the sun is lost", so it does seem they care about it.

But I would love it if experts can weigh in, and share how GMAT treats other similar sentences and if missing info is a red flag or if it can be acceptable under the right circumstances.

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Hello, TargetMBA007. Missing information is not necessarily a red flag. It depends on the context of the sentence. I think Ajitesh has done a fine job explaining above, in this post, why the information about the Sun seems important to the sentence at hand. As for other sentences, I have written a lengthy post on as _____ as comparisons in which I discuss the issue. Here is a snippet from the end:

AndrewN wrote:
Most importantly, trust your process and the context of the sentence at hand, not some hard-and-fast rule that you read in a forum or saw in a YouTube tutorial. First, what is the comparison? Second, if there are missing words, what reasonable interpretation can you supply? I would suggest you get rid of any options on grounds that you feel more confident assessing before you turn to anything else. When you work with just what is left, you start to see matters in a different light.

Circling back to the sentence in this thread, you should be asking yourself whether, in answer choices (D) and (E), you could reasonably supply the modifier ejected from the Sun if you were unaware of it from the other sentences, and also whether the sentence makes sense without such information. I will add another vote in favor of supplying the missing information.

Good luck with your studies.

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Thanks AndrewN - That is very helpful.
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