daagh wrote:
According to United States census data, while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.
If you are steadfast in your thinking, that ' working outside the home' should modify the mothers and not the children, and then you are good to the last.
(A) while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home -- working outside modifies children
(B) there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home -- young children who worked outside - is wrong
(C) in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home-- Only in C worked is the main verb for the mothers.-- correct choice.
(D) even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000 - young children who worked - wrong modification as in B.
(E) with about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000 ---- 'young children working outside' is wrong as in A.
Hello Sir,
Although above are some really strong points to eliminate incorrect answer choices and these should have caught my attention, I eliminated the answer choices "A" and "B" for the usage of
"two-thirds of those mothers", which, I think, incorrectly implies that this set of women(mothers) in 2000 is from the same set of women from 1975.
whereas, the phrase:
"two-thirds of such mothers" implies that this set of mothers, in 2000 is the same
type of mothers previously mentioned.
and then, in "D" and "E", I think the usage of "even though..." and "with..." is incorrect.
Can you please validate the reasoning ?
Your reasoning is exactly correct, it is already explained by another forum expert here:
Also, Since both clauses are independent, the use of connector "even though" or "with" is incorrect. Refer to the link to validate your POE here: