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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has should be have since plural fossils

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has should be have since plural fossils

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
were is wrong here - should be was.


I think A sounds about right.
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will go with A...was tempted for option B...got confused because of the word 'Fossils'
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S-V agreement : has Vs have - have wins

"having" is wrong almost/always wrong on GMAT.

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Question guys,

Is it correct to avoid a comma after hominids?
A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids, have

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Is it correct to avoid a comma after hominids?
A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids, have


I think that would be wrong. if you read the sentence withought the adjective ('that' pronoun reference clause), it will be " Fossils of a whale , have been recovered by paleontologists" so obviously this construction is wrong.
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IMO A
B & C - It should be have not has
D - not much insight in having been usage but it sounds wrong to me.
E - were is not required not it is correct.
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IMO A
B & C - Have should be used to agree with "fossils"
D & E - seem to have incorrect verb tense
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Fossils of a whale <<that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have>> been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have

This example was posted earlier, the oa is A
Can somebody explain why usage of <<was>> is correct?
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'That' is a relative pronoun which refers to the preceeding word. Therefore in this case that is refering to whales.

D & E are out - inadequate use of 'having been'.
Fossils is plural and requires have and not has - S&V agreement;B & C are out.
The sentence has a passive tone and requires simple past. Therefore 'was subsequently butchered' is used.

A overcomes all the mentioned errors
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@Lolaergasheva: Ask a simple question. What was butchered? You will know that the fossils were not butchered; it was the whale that was butchered. Can any other verb but ‘was’ suit the singular whale.
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Fossils of a whale <<that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have>> been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have

This example was posted earlier, the oa is A
Can somebody explain why usage of <<was>> is correct?


You ask a good question here, and although others have given completely correct explanations I want to boil it down to a key point:

Unless there is a clear reason to use a more complex tense, you want to use the simplest tense possible. In this example, the whale beached (simple past tense) and was butchered (simple past tense). This is clear, parallel, and simple.

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'was' or 'were' will depend on whether the subject is plural or singular.

Here the subject is 'a whale' , essentially singular.

hence, was.
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Fossils of a whale that (beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids) have been recovered by paleontologists.

"was subsequently ......" is parallel with "beached on an ..." and describes "whale".
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Clearly answer is A.

In option D,E- having is incorrect.
The subject here is fossils(Plural) and hence the verb should be have.Hence B & C are out.
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A for me as well. Good question.
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The original sentence is correct. A
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