TBT wrote:
Although once they had sought equality by appealing peacefully, the Sovereign Party workers became corrupted by power and now exist as violent activists who have lost sight of their core ideals.
a. Although once they had sought equality by appealing peacefully
b. Where once they were seeking equality by appealing peacefully
c. When once they sought equality by means of peaceful appealing
d. Although once they had sought equality in appealing peacefully
e. While once they sought equality by appealing peacefully
first of all, we are comparing a past situation with a present situation, the correct way to compare that is although. Then, the first part of the underlined portion says that they did something, and the second portion refers to the way they did the thing. So correct preposition should be by.
Now lets take a look to each of the alternatives
a. Although once they had sought equality by appealing peacefully
they used although and by, so lets keep itb. Where once they were seeking equality by appealing peacefully
where is used to indicate a physical place, so eliminatec. When once they sought equality by means of peaceful appealing
when is used to indicate an specific time lapse, but here is a comparison between to different times that are not specified.d. Although once they had sought equality in appealing peacefully
right usage of although but not sure about the preposition "in". keep it for nowe. While once they sought equality by appealing peacefully
while is used to indicate 2 things that occur simultaneously, and here are 2 situation that are sequentialNow we have D and A, but as I said before, the second part of the underlined portion is saying in which way something were made, so correct preposition should be "By". Also By is parallel with the non-underlined portion.
X did something
by, X were transformed
byIMO A