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Although Plato's inspiration for his descriptions of the civilization of Atlantis and its destruction appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are how stories of events a thousand years previous were passed down to Plato's time.

(A) appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are

(B) appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is

(C) appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is

(D) appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are

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Although Plato's inspiration for his descriptions of the civilization of Atlantis and its destruction appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are how stories of events a thousand years previous were passed down to Plato's time.

(A) appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are

(B) appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is

(C) appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is

(D) appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are

(E) appear to be the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, that which remains mysterious is

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I'm happy to help. :-)

This is a very straightforward SV Agreement question. See:
http://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/subject-ve ... orrection/

Split #1: appear/appears. The subject inside the "although" clause is "Plato's inspiration", which is singular. Thus, we need the singular verb, "appears." Choices (C) & (D) & (E) are incorrect.

Split #2: is/are. This is very tricky, the final verb at the end of the underline. This verb relates two substantive clauses. A substantive clause (a.k.a. a "noun clause") is a clause that acts in the role of a noun. See:
http://magoosh.com/gmat/2012/substantiv ... -the-gmat/
The big idea is that substantive clauses, as subjects, are construed as singular (exceptions are discussed in the link). Technically, whether the "what" in the first substantive clause "what remains a mystery" is singular or plural depends on the whether its object is singular or plural. Here, its object is another substantive clause, "how stories of events a thousand years previous were passed down to Plato's time", which is construed as singular.
Thus, we need the singular verb "is".

Therefore, the answer can only be (B).

Does all this make sense?
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Answer B - The underlined portion of this sentence contains three verbs—appears, remains, and are—all of which must agree in number with their subjects and follow the correct tense sequence. The subject of appears is the singular noun inspiration, the subject of remains and are is what, which, since it refers to mystery, is also singular. Thus, appears and remains are correct, but are is incorrect. We need the singular form is. Only choice (B) maintains all of the correct subject-verb agreements and is, therefore, correct.

Are in choices (A) and (D) and appear in choices (C), (D) and (E) are incorrect. Choice (E) has the additional problem of appear to be, a less precise present infinitive than the perfect infinitive of appear to have been, which shows that Plato's inspiration occurred in the past. Also, that which, is merely more pretentious and needlessly wordier than the perfectly acceptable what.
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Although Plato's inspiration for his descriptions of the civilization of Atlantis and its destruction appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are how stories of events a thousand years previous were passed down to Plato's time.

A appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are
B appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is
C appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is
D appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are
E appear to be the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, that which remains mysterious is
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B seems best: appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is

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A appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are
B appears to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is---->correct !!
C appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery is
D appear to have been the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, what remains a mystery are
E appear to be the Minoan ruins of Crete and traditional stories of the partial destruction of the island of Thera, that which remains mysterious is
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Kaplan provides the answer that explains why B is incorrect?
However, I still feel hard and struggle to understand fully the meaning of the sentence. That is why I cannot know to use appear in singular or plural.

"to have been" is the correct tense.
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