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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
IMO E.
The original sentence has incorrect comparison between students in New York and London.
It should have been students in New York and those/students in London.
Also the correct idiom to be used here is Although X, Y....
Only E presents the sentence in correct format.
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Yes, some good points above.

FYI, as an additional note - for (B): the pace of people learning physics is about the same in New York and in London

can be improved to:

"the pace of people learning physics is about the same in New York as it is in London..."
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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
facts should be presented in simple present tense. So B,C and D are out. Between A and E, E wons because A has comparison error.
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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to London, their standardized test scores are far lower in New York.

Below are the steps I took to sort through this questions. I appreciate any feedback.

(A) students in New York learn physics at a similar pace to London, their
Their is ambiguous and redundant, with New York at the end it should read "the"

(B) the pace of people learning physics is about the same in New York and in London, the
pace is poorly placed and used

(C) physics is learned by students in New York at a similar pace to London's, their
Their is ambiguous and redundant, with New York at the end it should read "the"

(D) the pace of learning physics in New York and London is about the same, the

(E) students in New York and London learn physics at about the same pace, the

1. Eliminate A and E because of ", their"
2. Eliminate B, pace placement
3. Eliminate D, "paces is the same" should read as "paces are the same"
4. Choose Option E.
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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
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facts should be presented in simple present tense. So B,C and D are out. Between A and E, E wons because A has comparison error.


The facts are presented in the simple present tense in B, C, and D. Why do you think they are not?
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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
Can someone explain to me why B is incorrect compared to E, except for the usage of "people" instead of "students"

(B) the pace of people learning physics is about the same in New York and in London, the

(E) students in New York and London learn physics at about the same pace, the

How is Although X,Y form not executed here in B; "Although the pace, the test score" is incorrect? They are both nouns, tho don't belong to the same category. However, "Although students, the test score" don't belong to the same category either.
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Re: Although students in New York learn physics at a pace similar to Londo [#permalink]
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Can someone explain to me why B is incorrect compared to E, except for the usage of "people" instead of "students"

(B) the pace of people learning physics is about the same in New York and in London, the

(E) students in New York and London learn physics at about the same pace, the

How is Although X,Y form not executed here in B; "Although the pace, the test score" is incorrect? They are both nouns, tho don't belong to the same category. However, "Although students, the test score" don't belong to the same category either.


B, distorts the meaning. It is stating that the pace of people learning physics is the same in two places. What the sentence means is that all the people who are learning physics have the same pace. That is not the meaning that would jibe with the next part of the sentence.
What we want is the comparison between the rate/pace of learning of people in NY vs that of people in London. What it ends up intending is that the pace of all people in these places is the same.
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