Norgay wrote:
Hello
sayantanc2k and
mikemcgarry Please help, I have three doubts related to usage of which:
1) As in option A. can 'which' jump over a modifier phrase to modify a preceding noun? For instance, in option A. can which jump over the modifying phrase - 'colder and wetter than was usual in some regions' to modify 'weather'? If not in this sentence, do we ever get to see such a usage of 'which' from GMAT perspective?
2) Is 'slowing' in option B modifying the entire previous clause - 'which was colder and wetter than usual in some regions' or is it modifying 'weather'? Going by the rule that a verb-ing modifier, when used after a comma, attaches itself to the complete clause preceding the comma, I feel that 'slowing' is modifying the previous clause by attaching itself to 'which', and because 'which' further modifies 'weather', it gives a correct meaning.
3) Lastly, do you see 'slowing' in option B as a verb-ing modifier with comma? or a verb-ing modifier without a comma (as commas are actually used for the preceding modifier clause and we can omit the clause and sentence would still make sense --> Analysts blamed May's sluggish retail sales on unexciting merchandise as well as the weather *omit* slowing sales of barbecue grills and lawn furniture. ? By this , my intention is to understand if you see 'slowing' as a modifier to 'weather' used without a comma or as a modifier for previous dependent clause used with a comma.
Dear
Norgay,
I'm happy to respond.
Thank you for writing such a thoughtful question.
1) A "
which" modifier can "jump over" a
vital noun-modifier, which takes precedent over a "
which" phrase. Here, in (A), the intervening phrase is not vital.
2) My friend, the terminology "
verb-ing modifier" is sloppy and imprecise: please learn the word
participle. In option (B), the participle "
slowing" modifies the action of the previous "
which" clause. My friend, be highly suspicious about any "rule" about participles. Participles are incredibly flexible and can modify in an astonishing variety of ways. Any "rule" about them is virtually worthless.
3) Because the participle "
slowing" is modifying the action of the previous phrase, it is acting as a
verb-modifier, not a noun-modifier. Only noun-modifiers are subject to the
Modifier Touch Rule. Verb modifiers are considerably freer in their placement.
Does all this make sense?
Mike