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# As more and more people invest their money in savings

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As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money

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19 Feb 2009, 10:25
unplugged wrote:
As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money

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Agree with A.

All other options have modifer issue or distorts the meaning.
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19 Feb 2009, 10:53
A
all other has some prob or the other

unplugged wrote:
As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money

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01 Nov 2009, 04:04
Could you please explain what's the problem with B?

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01 Nov 2009, 04:18
IMO A...
Option B is unnecessarily wordy and does not convey the right meaning...
A is clear and concise

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25 Sep 2010, 05:17
Any reasons that B is incorrect. Is being wordy the only reason?

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25 Sep 2010, 09:34
Orange08 wrote:
Any reasons that B is incorrect. Is being wordy the only reason?

The usage "more and more been investing " is totally wrong.Tense is wrong.A is clear and to the point.

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25 Sep 2010, 18:50
I don't think you can say "more investing", only "more people". Eliminate
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money

Passive voice, the subject in the second part of the sentence is people, not money. Eliminate:
(C) As money is more and more invested by people

The "more and more" should describe the increase in people/investors rather than their action. Eliminate
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money

Ans A
(A) As more and more people invest their money

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31 Jan 2013, 05:04
Can someone please explain what's wrong with E? E maintains the llism of "abandoning" and "putting".

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31 Jan 2013, 10:10
sanjay1810 wrote:
Can someone please explain what's wrong with E? E maintains the llism of "abandoning" and "putting".

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The correct usage is investing money and not putting money.
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01 Oct 2017, 11:58
Can anyone explain why E is wrong??

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03 Oct 2017, 03:10
unplugged wrote:
As more and more people invest their money in savings certificates or money-market funds in order to earn higher interest, they are abandoning traditional low-interest investment havens such as passbook accounts and life insurance policies.
(A) As more and more people invest their money
(B) While people have more and more been investing their money
(C) As money is more and more invested by people
(D) More and more, when investors put their money
(E) While, more and more, investors have been putting their money

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A reason is provided as to why people are abandoning passbook and insurance policies....
"AS" should be used....
IMO A

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