Hi, I'm just flagging a couple of errors in this explanation. I might not have worried about it normally, but I noticed this post was tagged the most helpful expert reply, so I thought it would be important to note them in case anyone is misled.
The eliminations for A and D are misleading I think.
A: Present tense
could be appropriate in the relative clause. In this case it isn't logical, but in another sentence, eliminating just because "
it's best to keep all the verbs in some form of past tense" may lead someone to select an incorrect answer. The
relative clause is only describing the
noun phrase "
high-speed Internet connections". As an imperfect example, if the clause had've been something like: '... expected piracy to increase as the number of high-speed Internet connections that enable rapid download increased', that could work.
D: "Become" is
not past tense in this answer choice. The conjugated verb is "
would", which IS past tense (
future past ). "
Become" is
unconjugated in this answer choice. So this is not using a
present tense word to describe a past event, it is using
future past tense to describe the prediction of industry representatives made in the past.
I hope that helps to avoid any misunderstandings!
EMPOWERgmatVerbal wrote:
Hello Everyone!
This is a great example of a GMAT question that focuses on consistent verb tense! Let's start by looking at the question carefully, and identify any major differences between the options by highlighting them in orange:
At the end of 2001, motion picture industry representatives said that there were about a million copies of Hollywood movies available online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available.
(A) online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available
(B) online and expect the increase of piracy with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
(C) online, and they expect more piracy to increase with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
(D) online, and that they expected the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available
(E) online, and that they expected piracy to increase as high-speed Internet connections became more widely available
Since we know that this question focuses mainly on verb consistency, here are a couple places we can focus on:
1. expected / expect
2. became available / become available / the wider availability of
To begin, we need to determine when these events take place: in the past, present, or future? Let's look at the entire sentence for clues:
At the end of 2001, motion picture industry representatives said that there were about a million copies of Hollywood movies available online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available.
This takes place in 2001, which is clearly in the past! So, let's make sure all the verbs in each option reflect that:
(A) online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available
This is INCORRECT because it uses the present tense "become" instead of the past tense "became." Since this all takes place in the past, it's best to keep all the verbs in some form of past tense!
(B) online and expect the increase of piracy with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
This is INCORRECT because it uses the present tense "expect" for an event that took place in 2001, which is clearly in the past and requires past tense verbs to match!
(C) online, and they expect more piracy to increase with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
Again, this is INCORRECT because it uses the present tense "expect" to describe a past event!
(D) online, and that they expected the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available
This is INCORRECT because it uses the present tense "become" to describe a past event.
(E) online, and that they expected piracy to increase as high-speed Internet connections became more widely available
This is CORRECT! It uses past tense verbs consistently throughout the sentence to indicate that everything in the sentence occurred in the past!
There you have it - option E is the best choice because it uses consistent verb tenses!
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