OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 149: Sentence Correction (SC2)
At the urging of aviation industry leaders, who believed that the airplane
can only reach its full commercial potential if federal action were taken to improve and maintain safety standards, the Air Commerce Act was passed into law on May 20, 1926.
Quote:
(A) can only reach its full commercial potential if federal action were taken to improve
• i
f federal action WERE taken is constructed in the subjunctive
• the result clause, then, can only be in present conditional tense (would/could/might + bare infinitive)
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Correct: If THIS thing were to happen, then THAT thing could happen--
Wrong: If THIS thing were to happen, then THAT thing "can" happen
Eliminate A
Quote:
(B) could only reach its full commercial potential if federal action is taken to improve
• The year is 1926. We need a past tense verb.
• option B uses "is." Only zero and Type 1 conditionals (general truths and predictions made in the present, respectively) can use simple present in the IF clause
• This situation is not a general truth or a prediction made in the present
• Wrong: If THIS thing happens, then THAT thing IS
Eliminate B
(C) could only reach full commercial potential if
taking federal action to improve [NO WORKING VERB]
•
If taking federal action to improve does not have a working verb
• the meaning is silly—read carefully. It sounds as though the airplane
itself is taking federal action
Eliminate C
Quote:
(D) could only reach its full commercial potential if federal action were taken to improve
• Spot on.
If federal action WERE taken, then the airline could reach its full potential.
KEEP
Quote:
(E) could only reach its full commercial potential if federal action would be taken for the improvement
• modal verbs never go in the IF clause
Wrong:
If federal action
would be taken . . .
• not parallel.
In the non-underlined portion we have
maintain. Maintain and improvement are not parallel.
"Improve," as in correction option D, is parallel to maintain.
Eliminate E.
The answer is D• NOTESWe have a hypothetical in the past.
The aviation leaders hypothesized that if the federal government were to take action, "the airplane" (air travel)
could reach its full potential.
We need
IF THIS thing were to happen, then THAT thing would / could happen.
Option D gives us that structure.
COMMENTSThis one will be short.
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