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Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have

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Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an all-female cult that , perhaps as easrly as the six century BC, worshipped a goddess known in Latin as Bona Dea, "the good goddess.''

A) no change
B) Basing it on accounts of various ancient writers
C) With accounts of various ancient writers used for a basis
D) By the accounts of various ancient writers they used
E) Using accounts of various ancient writers

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I was undecided between A and E. Why is E more correct than A?

Whats wrong with A?

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elektraa wrote:
I was undecided between A and E. Why is E more correct than A?

Whats wrong with A?


'Based on' is not idiomatic here.

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I was undecided between A and E. Why is E more correct than A?

Whats wrong with A?



A says "Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars..". This is a wrong modifier. We need after the comma "the thing that is based on accounts of various ancient writers", not "scholars".


The answer should be ^ E ^

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I was undecided between A and E. Why is E more correct than A?

Whats wrong with A?


If A had to be right, it should have been - Based on accounts, sketches have been made by scholars.

E correctly says that scholars have used.
Using accounts, scholars have sketched.

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New post 24 Mar 2006, 09:04
Actually, we discussed this question before. I looked through the forum but couldn't find it :roll:

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New post 24 Mar 2006, 09:23
Very good explanation here
http://www.gmatclub.com/phpbb/viewtopic ... nt+writers
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elektraa wrote:
I was undecided between A and E. Why is E more correct than A?

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Scholars are not based on the account of .....

Hence E and NOT A

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New post 26 Mar 2006, 02:48
The scholars themselves are not "based on the accounts...", therefore A is out for the wrong modifier.

(E) reads just fine..

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