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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

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My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'. But i disagree with this explanation and my understanding is, phrase 'carefully coordinating...' modifies Beatrix Potter because its' Beatrix Potter who 'coordinating', not 'illustrations' do, hence answer choice B is correct. What's wrong with my understanding ? can somebody shed the light ?
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19 Aug 2011, 06:33
IMO the answer should be C.

Option B states "In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her...". Here "them" refers to book illustrations which raises a question what? In fact option A and option B also lead to the same issue.

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Its C!

C is the only option where all the references to various nouns are well connected and make perfect sense!

All other options with "them" in it ruin the reference!
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19 Aug 2011, 10:26
I have no doubt about pronoun 'them' in B. My question is all about modifier concept that OG explains. It's very confusing.
According to OG, 'carefully coordinating...' is in position to modify 'book illustrations', but my understanding is, 'carefully coordinating...' should modify 'Beatrix Potter' instead, which is similar to ''Walking along the road, Beatrix Potter saw several types of flowers''. Can anyone explain ?

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22 Aug 2011, 07:08
I have no doubt about pronoun 'them' in B. My question is all about modifier concept that OG explains. It's very confusing.
According to OG, 'carefully coordinating...' is in position to modify 'book illustrations', but my understanding is, 'carefully coordinating...' should modify 'Beatrix Potter' instead, which is similar to ''Walking along the road, Beatrix Potter saw several types of flowers''. Can anyone explain ?

Yes your understanding is correct but you cant compare "Walking along the road, Beatrix Potter saw several types of flowers'' because you have only Beatrix Potter as the subject but in the given problem you have "Beatrice Potter" and "her book illustrations"....

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My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'.
. The explanation is correct. Assuming B is correct, look at the sentence below:

In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

Probably this will help you to understand that carefully coordinating is modifying illustrations and not Beatrice.....

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22 Aug 2011, 22:26
Can you explain more detailed why 'carefully coordinating...'
must modify 'book illutrations' while 'carefully coordinating....' can also modify the following clause 'Beatrix Potter'. Is there any grammatical rule that validate this type of modifier ?

To my understanding, V-ing participle modify its preceeding noun when there's no comma (,) in between V-ing participle and preceeding noun. In this case, there's a comma in between 'book illustration' and 'carefully coordinating', it's very weird.

In terms of meaning, if 'carefully coordinating...' modifies 'book illustrations' (not 'in her book illustrations'), then who do the 'coordinating' ? book illustration ? i don't think so.

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05 Sep 2011, 00:22
Can you explain more detailed why 'carefully coordinating...'
must modify 'book illutrations' while 'carefully coordinating....' can also modify the following clause 'Beatrix Potter'. Is there any grammatical rule that validate this type of modifier ?

To my understanding, V-ing participle modify its preceeding noun when there's no comma (,) in between V-ing participle and preceeding noun. In this case, there's a comma in between 'book illustration' and 'carefully coordinating', it's very weird.

In terms of meaning, if 'carefully coordinating...' modifies 'book illustrations' (not 'in her book illustrations'), then who do the 'coordinating' ? book illustration ? i don't think so.

Good point..I am little confused here as well..What Carefully coordinating trying to modify..

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19 Sep 2011, 00:21
I choose B first
then second time got it right
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27 Sep 2011, 11:02
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

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My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'. But i disagree with this explanation and my understanding is, phrase 'carefully coordinating...' modifies Beatrix Potter because its' Beatrix Potter who 'coordinating', not 'illustrations' do, hence answer choice B is correct. What's wrong with my understanding ? can somebody shed the light ?
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A - Incorrect - them is ambigous
B - Incorrect - wrong placement of modifiers
C - Correct
D - Incorrect - Beatrix Potter was not Carefully coordinated
E - Incorrect - them is ambigous
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27 Sep 2011, 19:58
'which' correctly refers to book illustration & uses " coordinated ' which is the correct tense for this sentence(Past tense).

C is the most appropriate.

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27 Sep 2011, 20:00
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

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My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'. But i disagree with this explanation and my understanding is, phrase 'carefully coordinating...' modifies Beatrix Potter because its' Beatrix Potter who 'coordinating', not 'illustrations' do, hence answer choice B is correct. What's wrong with my understanding ? can somebody shed the light ?
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A - Incorrect - them is ambigous
B - Incorrect - wrong placement of modifiers
C - Correct
D - Incorrect - Beatrix Potter was not Carefully coordinated
E - Incorrect - them is ambigous

'them' is not ambiguos. It clearly refers to book illustration. Them is used for plural & "beatrix potter is definitely not a plural". So the use of them is not ambiguous.

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19 Oct 2011, 06:43
fell for B
Good question BTW.

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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

[Reveal] Spoiler: My Doubt
My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'. But i disagree with this explanation and my understanding is, phrase 'carefully coordinating...' modifies Beatrix Potter because its' Beatrix Potter who 'coordinating', not 'illustrations' do, hence answer choice B is correct. What's wrong with my understanding ? can somebody shed the light ?
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Chose B at first. But B has pronoun ambiguity. C is the best answer.

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17 May 2012, 13:25
C is correct.

The trick in this one, from my perspective, is that the prepositional phrase (in her book illustrations) is interrupted by the non essential modifier phrase, in which... phrase that correctly modifies book illustrations.

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good question, think its from the OG ... C worked for me because the comma was underlined at the end

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I have no doubt about pronoun 'them' in B. My question is all about modifier concept that OG explains. It's very confusing.
According to OG, 'carefully coordinating...' is in position to modify 'book illustrations', but my understanding is, 'carefully coordinating...' should modify 'Beatrix Potter' instead, which is similar to ''Walking along the road, Beatrix Potter saw several types of flowers''. Can anyone explain ?

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

Choice B: In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
In this choice, we have verb-ing modifier “coordinating” after comma. The rule is if the verb-ing modifier is placed after comma, then it modifies the entire preceding clause. However, in this choice, there is not clause before the comma.

You are correct in saying that Beatrix Potter did the action of “coordinating” and logically it should refer to Potter. However, the placement of this modifier is such that it fails to do what it should do. Hence, logically “coordinating” is modifying Potter but grammatically it is not because of it placement after comma.

Let’s compare this choice with the example you have presented:

Walking along the road, Beatrix Potter saw several types of flowers.

There is no modifier error in this sentence. The sentence begins with the verb-ing modifier “walking”, and correctly modifies the subject of the main clause “Beatrix Potter” because she did the action of walking. Notice here that there is no comma before the verb-ing modifier.
In choice B of this OG question, we do have a comma before the verb-ing modifier. Thus it should modify the preceding clause. But there is no clause there. I also quite don’t agree to all the explanations of OG. They have terrific questions but not all the explanations are that good.

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01 Sep 2013, 12:10
IMHO OG correctly explained it

Th is sentence awkwardly presents two phrases
intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the
clarity and logic of the meaning.
In the original
sentence, these modifiers sound choppy and
create too much separation between the subject,
Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning
the sentence with In her book illustrations and
following that phrase with the relative clause
which she carefully coordinated with her narratives
allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united
with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main
clause.

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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

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My question: according to OG explanation, B is wrong because phrase 'carefully coordinating....' illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it 'book illustrations'. But i disagree with this explanation and my understanding is, phrase 'carefully coordinating...' modifies Beatrix Potter because its' Beatrix Potter who 'coordinating', not 'illustrations' do, hence answer choice B is correct. What's wrong with my understanding ? can somebody shed the light ?
GMAT loves to confuse test takers by creating multiple modifiers between S and V. It's critical to learn the correct understanding

A - Incorrect - them is ambigous
B - Incorrect - wrong placement of modifiers
C - Correct
D - Incorrect - Beatrix Potter was not Carefully coordinated
E - Incorrect - them is ambigous

Can anybody explain me how is them in option A ambiguous. According to me, there is only 1 plural noun illustrations.
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, --> Verb tense coordinating - capitalized
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter --> illustrations coodinate nothing, Beatrix is the Doer. Ing-modifier after a comma modifies the preceding clause -> In her book illustrations + wrong verb tense again
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter --> correct structure 1st modifies Beatrix, 2nd (which) modifies the illustrations. Correct Verb Tense --> coordinated and capitalizedbut
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations --> Beatrix is not coordinated with narratives...rather illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and --> "in her book illustrations" is a prepositional phrase and it modifies Beartix here, it can not be the referent of THEM here.
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