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# Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully

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21 Jun 2010, 08:27
A request : pls be extra careful when posting the OA. I kept scratching my head when I saw your first OA and thought how in this world can option E be a correct grammatical construction...until obviously you mentioned the correct answer.

Sometimes, seeing an answer which you are least expecting as the OA can affect your self-confidence!!!

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21 Jun 2010, 09:21
I thought the answer to be D .

Can some one please tell me what is the difference between "with her narratives" and "by her narratives" .
Is the former usage wrong ?

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21 Jun 2010, 10:40
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For me it was a pronoun reference error, them did not refer to books or Beatrix clearly, this was solved in C.

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21 Jun 2010, 20:46
The only contenders are B and C. E is wrong.

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31 May 2011, 06:42
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Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Verb parallelism
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations Modifies Beatrix Potter
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and --- Pronoun reference/ comma should be preceded by "and".No reference to "Them" if in her book illustrations is removed.

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23 Jun 2011, 07:46
I choose C since we are trying to figure out the answer to the mysterious pronoun!
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23 Jun 2011, 10:44
Them in A and B are useless. So C it is

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23 Jun 2011, 14:06
It is C. The only answer without a modifier error.

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28 Jun 2011, 03:01
C for me

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13 Nov 2011, 18:01
I'm confused. There is only one thing that "them" can be referring to in answer E.

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13 Nov 2011, 22:33
pronouns==> "Them" in C is resolved ==> +1 for C

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13 Nov 2011, 23:09
C - reference error. This is an OG question I think.

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14 Nov 2011, 19:48
Answer is C. E has problem with the connecting word 'and'. You cannot say that "I will go to school, and study'. Instead, the correct is " I will go to school and study"
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16 Dec 2011, 12:33
Shouldnt C be incorrect ? I read somewhere that after comma we cant use "which"..It can be used after a noun, right ?

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[quote="sagarsabnis"]162. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,them is ambiguous here
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter improper modifier carefully coordinating...........
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter Correct
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations mispalced modifier
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
in her book illustrations is an essential modifier

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06 Apr 2012, 05:15
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Good example to work with modification errors.

All answers except have clearly got modification errors.
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27 Jun 2012, 05:51
Neat question that tests modifiers and pronouns.

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

-- 'which' correctly modifies illustrations.
-- 'she' and 'her' correctly represent Ms. Potter.

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27 Jun 2012, 07:00
Option A and B parallelism error. Option D and E misplaced modifiers. Leaves you with option C.

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