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By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligenc [#permalink]
Thanks for your reply generis. I had missed the part about reducing relative clauses. "that enable" becomes "enabling", got it now.
Very interesting, thanks for your help.
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Dear experts, please confirm/dismiss my following idea:
B - "withholding disclosure" has redundant meaning
C - "to withhold from public disclosure" has redundant meaning
E - "withhold public disclosure" has redundant meaning
All these options in average mean that one intents to conceal information in order not to reveal this information. Sounds redundant, does not it?
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Re: By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligenc [#permalink]
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Hi WinWinMBA,

Thank you for your question.

Let's start by looking at the first major difference I saw when looking over the question quickly: it vs. they/them. Since the pronoun is referring back to the Central Intelligence Agency, which is a singular noun, the pronoun should match - so let's keep answers A, B, and C because they use the singular "it" or no pronoun at all. Therefore, we can eliminate answers D & E because they use the plural "they" or "them," which is wrong.

Answer C should also go because it doesn't clearly state WHO gets to do the withholding, and it sounds awkward. This leaves us with answers A & B. Let's look at what is different about each one:

A: enabling it to withhold from the public
B: for it to withhold from the public

In answer B, using the word "for" changes the meaning of the sentence and the intentions of the Supreme Court. By saying they are awarding the CIA powers "for" a purpose, they are saying that the Supreme Court awarded the CIA more power knowing they would use it for that purpose and ONLY that purpose. This isn't true - they just gave the CIA more power, but it's not clear WHY they did so.

The word "enabling" is a much stronger choice to show that the Supreme Court is giving the CIA power, and that power allows them to withhold information. Using "enabling" shows that the court decision is a cause, and withholding information is an effect, which is the intended meaning. The court didn't give them the power to withhold information directly - they did that indirectly by awarding them more power. Therefore, this is the right answer.



So can we say that (B) is grammatically correct? and since the original sentence has no grammatical error we stick to the meaning of the original sentence?

The reason I ask this question is that, at times, I am down to two options that (I believe) have no grammatical error. Then things get a bit serious for me :P
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EMPOWERgmatVerbal wrote:
Hi WinWinMBA,

Thank you for your question.

Let's start by looking at the first major difference I saw when looking over the question quickly: it vs. they/them. Since the pronoun is referring back to the Central Intelligence Agency, which is a singular noun, the pronoun should match - so let's keep answers A, B, and C because they use the singular "it" or no pronoun at all. Therefore, we can eliminate answers D & E because they use the plural "they" or "them," which is wrong.

Answer C should also go because it doesn't clearly state WHO gets to do the withholding, and it sounds awkward. This leaves us with answers A & B. Let's look at what is different about each one:

A: enabling it to withhold from the public
B: for it to withhold from the public

In answer B, using the word "for" changes the meaning of the sentence and the intentions of the Supreme Court. By saying they are awarding the CIA powers "for" a purpose, they are saying that the Supreme Court awarded the CIA more power knowing they would use it for that purpose and ONLY that purpose. This isn't true - they just gave the CIA more power, but it's not clear WHY they did so.

The word "enabling" is a much stronger choice to show that the Supreme Court is giving the CIA power, and that power allows them to withhold information. Using "enabling" shows that the court decision is a cause, and withholding information is an effect, which is the intended meaning. The court didn't give them the power to withhold information directly - they did that indirectly by awarding them more power. Therefore, this is the right answer.



So can we say that (B) is grammatically correct? and since the original sentence has no grammatical error we stick to the meaning of the original sentence?

The reason I ask this question is that, at times, I am down to two options that (I believe) have no grammatical error. Then things get a bit serious for me :P


Hello Hoozan,

We hope this finds you well.

To resolve your query - yes; your understanding is correct. Option B is grammatically correct; its only error is that it changes the original meaning.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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Re: By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligenc [#permalink]
D and E are about because of 'they'
C is wordy

Between A and B concentrate on powers for:
Powers for something, we should expect a noun while there is a clause

A looks better
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A good policy is to avoid ever eliminating an answer just because it is "wordy." Sometimes the wordiest answer is correct! The wrong answers should actually be INCORRECT in some way we can describe. On rare occasions, you might see an SC in which the right answer is simply worded more cleanly than an alternative that is not inherently wrong, but this is actually quite rare. As folks have noted above, B is wrong because of its meaning, not because it is wordy.
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Re: By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligenc [#permalink]
Why option "enabling it to withhold from the public" doesn't have comma (,) in the answer?
Without comma (,), it seems that enabling is modifying the power and not representing the cause - effect relationship.
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Shouldnt there be a 'comma' before enabling?
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