Despite the Puritan sumptuary laws prohibiting the wearing of bright

Despite the Puritan sumptuary laws prohibiting the wearing of bright or elaborate clothing, if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public.

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A) if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public

At first glance, this has a pronoun issue with "one" and "you", which is shifting throughout the sentence. Consistency is necessary. "Their" is also the incorrect number for "one" or "you".

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B) if one had either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public.

"Their" is also the incorrect number for "one" or "you".

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C) having either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds would allow one to publicly display their material prosperity

"Their" is also the incorrect number for "one" or "you".

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D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to displaytheir material prosperity in public

Correct.

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E) those having either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity

Changes the meaning a bit.... "permitted to" vs. "permitted".

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IMHO D

A) if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public

B) if one had either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public

C) having either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds would allow one to publicly display their material prosperity

D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to display their material prosperity in public CORRECT

E) those having either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity

this question is an example of what gmat prefer. some point of grammar/style is not explained in grammar books but is prefered by gmat.
why choice E is wrong?

gmat prefer verb "to display" over noun "display". action should be presented by verb not by noun. this way make sentence more direct and clear.

this is the point gmat prefer. we do not need to understand more. choose a choice in which action is presented by verb not by noun.

in short, gmat prefer verb over noun. choose the choice with verb and eliminate the choice with noun.

another explanation of choice E"
choice E can be considered unidiomatic. if the second action is performed by the same subject, "permited to do " is used. if something, not an action, follow the the first verb, "permit something" is used.

The owners have been unwilling to permit the use of their land.

the above sentence is in the Oxford dictionary. the noun "use" show an action but this action is not perform by the subject, so noun , but not verb , is used to show this action.

in short, if the second action is perform by the same subject, "permited to do" is used.

we can not think for a long time this way in the test room. if you face both "permited to do" and "permited something", "permited to do" is normally correct. "permited something" is correct only when the second action is not done by the same subject or when there is no second action.

"we do not allow eating in the room.

above sentence is from oxford dictionary. "eating" show an action which dose not refer to the subject. so , we do not use "to eat". if the second action is also perform by the subject, "to do" is used.

so , be careful about " allow somebody to do". both "allow" and "to do" need to be performed by the same subject.

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Hi - I could not find any fault in Option (E) those having either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity.

Kindly shed some light on this please

Hi rnn,
Participle clause “having........pounds” correctly modifies the subject those.
Phrase “their public display of material prosperity” is wrong. Those individuals were permitted TO do something. That something here is “their public display”, which is just awkwardly constructed.
Had the sentence been written as “ were permitted to display their material prosperity in public.”, it would have been correct.

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What does "those" in choice D refer to? I can't find the antecedent. Is it okay to use "those" without antecedent?

Thank you!

Despite the Puritan sumptuary laws prohibiting the wearing of bright or elaborate clothing, = DC
if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public.=DC

it seems only 2 dependent clause without IC
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good question I do not know "those" refer to either Puritan sumptuary laws or clothing !
in addition to their which refer to !

(D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to display their material prosperity in public
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Despite the Puritan sumptuary laws prohibiting the wearing of bright or elaborate clothing, if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public.

(A) if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public

- You and one cannot be used together..use either one ...one or you ...you.
- IF clause with past perfect required " would " + verb to match the tense. Which is absent
- Plural "their" does not match subject "one"

Hence eliminate A

(B) if one had either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public

-Error of one and you in option A is corrected here.
-But there is error in mismatch of subject and verb- "one" - singular and " their " plural
-IF clause + Past perfect tense requires " Would" + verb- Which is absent.

Eliminate Option B

(C) having either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds would allow one to publicly display their material prosperity

- Subject Verb mismatch again " one " - singular and "Their" plural. No other plural referent for "their"

Eliminate C

(D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to display their material prosperity in public

Correct
" those " Plural reference of " their"
All other errors are also rectified.

(E) those having either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity

-"Were permitted their public display" - meaning changes. As per original sentence those having x and y were permitted to display material prosperity... not their display

- "those having"- unnecessarily wordy.
So eliminate E

Ans - choice D

Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-



Choice A: This answer choice incorrectly uses the second-person pronoun "you" with the third-person pronoun "one". This answer choice also incorrectly utilizes the plural pronoun "their" alongside the singular pronouns "you" and "one". Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice B: This answer choice incorrectly utilizes the plural pronoun "their" alongside the singular pronoun "one". Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice C: This answer choice repeats the error found in Option B. Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Choice D: This answer choice maintains proper pronoun use and preserves the intended meaning of the sentence. Thus, this answer choice is correct.

Choice E: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence, slightly; the phrase "were permitted their public display" implies that certain people were allowed to have a public display of wealth, while the correct implication is that certain people were allowed to take the action of publicly displaying their wealth. Additionally, this construction is a bit awkward. Thus, this answer choice is incorrect.

Hence, D is the best answer choice.

All the best!
Experts' Global Team
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CORRELATIVE IDIOMS, MODIFIERS


Despite the Puritan sumptuary laws prohibiting the wearing of bright or elaborate clothing, if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public.

(A) if you had either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public -------- Modifier "Despite" should be next to the main clause.


(B) if one had either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds one was permitted to display their material prosperity in public -------- Modifier "Despite" should be next to the main clause.


(C) having either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds would allow one to publicly display their material prosperity ---------------- correlative idiom EITHER X OR Y is nor parallel, as the second element "annual income" does not carry an article.


(D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to display their material prosperity in public ----------- CORRECT


(E) those having either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity ---------------- Changes meaning as it implies that the people were permitted "something" , not that they were permitted to PERFORM AN ACTION, as it was originally intended.
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1. Pronouns (you, one, their)
2. Parallelism
3. Style/Diction - Active vs Passive voice


"either" is a parallel trigger. Make sure that both items that "either" introduces are in parallel form.
Examples:
Correct "I will buy my nephew either a basketball or a football.
Incorrect "I will buy my nephew either a basketball or football.



Our Parallelism is fine.

What about our Pronouns? We start with 2nd person pronoun "you," then we switch to the 3rd person singular pronoun "one," then we switch to 3rd person plural pronoun "their." Yikes!

Pronoun Error - Eliminate


Parallelism is broken. We need the article "an" before "annual income" so that "a liberal education" is parallel with "annual income."

Pronouns are inconsistent. We start with 3rd person singular "one" and use it twice, but then we switch to 3rd person plural "their."

Pronoun and Parallelism Errors - Eliminate

Parallelism is broken. Same issue as answer choice (B).

Pronouns are inconsistent. We start with 3rd person singular "one," but then we switch to 3rd person plural "their."

Pronoun and Parallelism Errors - Eliminate


Parallelism is fine.

Pronouns are consistent.

Hold this answer choice.


Parallelism is fine.

Pronouns are consistent.

"were permitted their public display of material prosperity" is in passive voice.

Answer choice (D) is much clearer and uses active voice.
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When we see that ‘Despite…’ is a modifier, we need to ask what it is modifying.

Since Option A does not seem to have the subject placed immediately after the comma, we can scan the rest of the options.

We see that options D and E have the subject placed after the comma.

Option E changes the meaning with ‘having’ incorrectly modifying ‘those’.

Eliminate Option E.

Option D is the best choice.

Hope this helps!
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Hi everyone,

I am still confused by the fact why there is no antecedent. Do we just assume those is referring to People?

Hi GMATNinja mikemcgarry,

CAn you please help why option E is wrong. I was stuck btw options D and E.

Experts chiranjeev GMATNinja VeritasKarishma. Please guide. I have few doubts here.

Apart from below pronoun errors in choice A,
1. Shift from 'you' to 'one'.
2. Usage of 'their' with 'one'.

Is the rest of the construction valid ?

As per my opinion, 'Despite...' should have a modifying entity after comma as in choices D & E.

Also, I rejected option E because of ambiguous construction 'their public display of material prosperity'.

Yes, because the singular "one" and plural "their" are used in choice A, B or C and they don't agree in numbers. You can use one's instead. After we eliminated choice ABC, we are left with D and E and "those" is inevitable.

The question on the website is wrong.

This is the question in OV:

(D) those with either a liberal education or an annual income of two hundred pounds were allowed to display their material prosperity in public

(E) those having either a liberal education or annual income of two hundred pounds were permitted their public display of material prosperity

"sb were permitted their public display of material prosperity" is not the problem.
permit sb sth
sb be permitted sth
allow sb sth
sb be allowed sth

"having" is not the problem.
those having sth=those who have/had sth= those with


the problem is an annual income of two hundred pounds

an!!!!!