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“Nevertheless” is a connector meaning “yet” or “but”. You can see the futility and redundancy of “but” in E. Again, when we use a connector like “nevertheless”, both arms of the connector should be parallel. Choices A, B and E use a clause on one side and a participial phrase on the other.
We must say ‘Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless create sounds’ using verbs on both sides.
A also falters on Subject –Verb agreement.
The choice has to be between C and D while D lacks the use of ‘by’ at the end. “being produce sphincter” is wrong usage and awkward. Hence, C is the answer.
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AjiteshArun Is but and nevertheless redundant in the above Question ?
assuming but and nevertheless is not redundant how can we reject E ?
The nevertheless is not necessary, but there is a much more reliable way to remove E. This is the sentence option E leads to:

Dolphins lack vocal cords, but nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by sphincter muscle inside the blowhole.

We're basically saying "Dolphins lack (verb) something but creating (participle) something". The conjunction but does not join two similar elements in this case (lack and creating), and that's a great reason to take this option out.

Here is another question that tests the same thing.
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Hi GMATNinja GMATNinjaTwo,

I was wondering if you could please go through each of the answer choices and explain why the incorrect answer choices are incorrect? Upon searching this question on this platform and other websites, I noticed that there wasn't much discussion on this question for some reason even though the tag given is from GMATPrep.
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Rukia wrote:
Hi AjiteshArun,

It seems Bunuel fixed a typo but Choice C still has “with” at the end.

Hi Rukia,

I think "produce something with a muscle" is okay. For example, I've come across phrases like produce force with a muscle or muscle group (1) many times.
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“Nevertheless” is a connector meaning “yet” or “but”. You can see the futility and redundancy of “but” in E. Again, when we use a connector like “nevertheless”, both arms of the connector should be parallel. Choices A, B and E use a clause on one side and a participial phrase on the other.
We must say ‘Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless create sounds’ using verbs on both sides.
A also falters on Subject –Verb agreement.
The choice has to be between C and D while D lacks the use of ‘by’ at the end. “being produce sphincter” is wrong usage and awkward. Hence, C is the answer.
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nevertheless is an adverb, which connect two independent clause. so, nevertheless can not stand in that position. only a few, not all, prepositions/conjunctions can stand in that position in choice A and B.

in the pattern
the main clause + comma+doing phrase

in this, doing phrase can stand before or after the main clause
in this pattern, doing phrase can show many meaning relations with the main clause, such as context, reason or cause of the main verb in the main clause. but doing can not show a contrast meaning with the meaning of the main clause.

instead of learning gmat, I go out for change

"instead of" is preposition/conjunction which can be in this position. I dont care "instead of" in this position is a preposition or conjunction. I think it is a conjunction because "learning" works as an adjective as in the case of " although tired, I continue to work".

Originally posted by thangvietnam on 11 May 2019, 09:17.
Last edited by thangvietnam on 21 Mar 2022, 04:11, edited 1 time in total.
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Vatsal7794 wrote:
Hi AjiteshArun

Thanks for the explanation

Can you please confirm that nevertheless is not used to show the contrast ?

Thanks


Hello Vatsal7794,

We hope this finds you well.

Having gone through the question and your query, we believe that we can help resolve your doubt.

To clarify, "nevertheless" is used to show contrast. The issue with the answer choices that use "nevertheless" - Options A, B, and E - is that they also use the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing" - "creating" in this sentence)", illogically implying that dolphins create sounds both because and despite the fact that they do not have vocal cords; please remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “creating” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.

To understand the concept of "Comma plus Present Participle for Cause Effect relationship", you may want to watch the following video (~3 minutes):



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rachelphwu wrote:
Hello~ Can anyone explain if producing a complicated system of sounds makes sense?
Does it really mean producing a system, rather than producing multiple complicated sounds?


Hello rachelphwu,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, the intended meaning here is that in creating sounds, dolphins produce a complicated system that is made up of different sounds; what the dolphins are producing is a system that is complicated; the sounds that the system is made of can be complicated or simple; that is not specified.

We hope this helps.
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Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks are produced by sphincter muscle inside the blowhole

A) nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks are produced by

B) nevertheless creating sounds; they produce a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with

C) but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with

D) but they do create sounds, a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks being produced

E) but nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by

This question is available on gmatclub in a different version from 2006.


Need reasons to eliminate A and B

Is A wrong becoz of BY at the end?
Is B wrong becoz of CREATING?
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Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks are produced by sphincter muscle inside the blowhole

A) nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks are produced by

B) nevertheless creating sounds; they produce a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with

C) but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with

D) but they do create sounds, a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks being produced

E) but nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by

This question is available on gmatclub in a different version from 2006.


Need reasons to eliminate A and B

Is A wrong becoz of BY at the end?
Is B wrong becoz of CREATING?

rocko911

Main reason to eliminate A and B is that they lack any contrast word such as but ,while or although.We need a contrast here.
And you are right that in option B,creating doesn't have any proper justification.
In A,produced by is not wrong.But its in passive voice.You should chose passive voice only when no right answer with active voice is available.
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HI GMATNinja, mikemcgarry, DmitryFarber, MagooshExpert (Carolyn), ccooley, GMATGuruNY, EMPOWERgmatVerbal, EducationAisle

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AjiteshArun Is but and nevertheless redundant in the above Question ?
assuming but and nevertheless is not redundant how can we reject E ?
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In A I rejected for are as it should be is
Why B is wrong ?
what's wrong in "nevertheless creating sound" in B
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AjiteshArun
In A I rejected for are as it should be is
Why B is wrong ?
what's wrong in "nevertheless creating sound" in B
This is what we get with option B:

Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless creating sounds; they produce a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with sphincter muscle inside the blowhole.

The ", nevertheless creating sounds" is wrong for two reasons:
1. It doesn't logically connect to the clause "Dolphins lack vocal cords". Participles used this way normally communicate something that extends what the initial clause communicates. However, here the participle brings us an entirely new idea that does not connect to the initial clause at all (it is actually a contrasting idea). For example:

She did not go to the movie with her friends, choosing to stay at home and study for the GMAT instead.

The instead could make us think that we're looking to introduce a contrasting idea, but even in this case the participle communicates something in the same "direction" as the initial clause "she did not go..."

2. Look at the portion after the semicolon. It is all about the fact that Dolphins can produce sounds. That is, the idea contained in the ", nevertheless creating sounds" bit is central to the intended meaning of the sentence. We should not stick it in a modifier and leave it there. It is more important than that. There is a big difference in terms of emphasis between (a) Dolphins lack vocal cords, nevertheless creating sounds and (b) Dolphins lack vocal cords, but nevertheless create sounds.

Option A: A participle is not appropriate here as it doesn't support the intended meaning. System is singular, but are is plural. The use of the passive voice is generally avoidable and the passive verb are produced by makes it harder for the reader to identify dolphins as the agent (the who or the what that produces those sounds).

Option B: A participle is not appropriate here as it doesn't support the intended meaning. The semicolon brings in a full subject-verb pair and because the "producing sounds" idea is not an integral part of the initial clause, the two clauses joined by the semicolon don't make as much sense anymore (Dolphins lack vocal cords; they produce a complicated system of sounds).

Option C: The best of the 5 options.

Option D: There is no by after produced, and the being makes it seem as if we are discussing an ongoing action.

Option E: But should not be used to join lack (a verb) and creating (a participle).

Finally, although this is marked as a GMATPrep question, I'm not comfortable with the non-underlined portion. Specifically, "with sphincter muscle" doesn't make any sense ("with sphincter muscles" or "with a sphincter muscle" would have been better).


Shouldn’t choice C rather say produced by or using the sphincter muscle instead of with sphincter muscle?
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Shouldn’t choice C rather say produced by or using the sphincter muscle instead of with sphincter muscle?

Hi Rukia,

I think there is a mistake in the question, possibly a typo. Flagging it for review.
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Shouldn’t choice C rather say produced by or using the sphincter muscle instead of with sphincter muscle?

Hi Rukia,

I think there is a mistake in the question, possibly a typo. Flagging it for review.

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