GMATNinja wrote:
Here's how I'd think about it: the moment I see "their," I'm asking myself two questions: 1) is there a plural noun the pronoun can refer to? and 2) does this plural noun make sense?
It's true that if my eyes drift backwards from "their" I might first come across "researchers" as a candidate. But while "researchers" is plural, it makes absolutely no sense. We're talking about something getting poached -- common sense tells me that we're probably referring to some kind of animal here, not researchers. (Though I definitely worked with some researchers in my PhD program who reminded me of wild animals.
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Also, the phrase "native habitats" is another clue that we're talking about an animal, not people. So I'll keep looking for my antecedent elsewhere.
As soon as my eyes begin to move in the other direction, they come across "leopards." Well, this is plural. And it's perfectly logical to write about leopards getting poached in
their natural habitats. So I'm pretty confident that "their" refers to "leopards." There's no rule about where to look for the pronoun's antecedent. I just knew I was looking for something plural and logical. "Leopards" is the only thing that works.
Do I love this? Nope. But I don't have to. There's no rule that if a sentence contains a plural pronoun, it must contain just one plural noun elsewhere in the sentence. It just needs to have
something that could work logically. Every other answer choice here contains a concrete error, so I'm left with option (E).
I hope that helps!
Hi
GMATNinja, sorry for digging up an old one, but can I just clarify the last part of your explanation: "It just needs to have
something that could work logically."
What if there are multiple
somethings that could work logically?
My inclination is that if I'm given two grammatically correct options and one makes it clearer what the correct antecedent is, then I will choose it; BUT, if not, ambiguity is not going to be an error to eliminate on. So I would eliminate things like verb agreement, parallelism, etc. first, and then only eliminate based on ambiguity before other style errors like wordiness.
Does that sound about right?
Exactly. If I have one answer choice where I have to do a little more work to figure out what "it" refers to, and the other four have concrete errors, clearly, the one with the "it" must be better, right?
So it's all about setting priorities. Concrete errors first,
the grayer issues that might be used as tie-breakers.