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It is B.

here comparison is between to move a limited amount ....... rather than to carry

only A and B does the comparison correctly. To move can not determine the design. However, the situation can determine the desingn.
So B it is.
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Here are my 2 cents...

(A)to carry larger loads more slowly ,determining ==> Determining is participial which modifying the previous clause. Makes no sense
(B)to carry larger loads more slowly,a situation that determined ==> Correct - reason ...'to carry' is parallel to 'to move' --> "a situation" clearly stating the situation discussed in the previous claus.
(C)carry larger loads more slowly ,which determined ==> Parallelism error .. "to carry" needs to parallel to "to move"
(D)slowly carry larger loads which determined ==> Parallelism error.. "to carry" needs to parallel to "to move"
(E)carrying loads more slowly ,and this was a situation in determining ==> Parallelism error.. "to carry" needs to parallel to "to move"
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I have also got stuck b/w A & B. The first part of sentence finishes correctly with 'to carry larger loads more slowly' as it is parallel with the first part.

A) determining the design of the clipper ship' is a second clause. What is wrong in this? This is mentioned in context with 'the way for a merchant to generate the most profit'
B) 'a situation that determined the design of the clipper ship'. I am okay with this as well.

Can anyone put light over this?
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I have also got stuck b/w A & B. The first part of sentence finishes correctly with 'to carry larger loads more slowly' as it is parallel with the first part.

A) determining the design of the clipper ship' is a second clause. What is wrong in this? This is mentioned in context with 'the way for a merchant to generate the most profit'
B) 'a situation that determined the design of the clipper ship'. I am okay with this as well.

Can anyone put light over this?


A is wrong because "determining" seems to modify the subject "the way" of the previous sentence. But "the way" didn't determine the design of the clipper ship. "a situation" in B is more clear.

Hope it helps.
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Original sentence (option A) is:
During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible, rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, determining the design of the clipper ship.

Here "determining" is a participle. The structure can be seen as
the way ... determining the design of the clipper ship

Problem with option A is: what is determining the design? There is no clear answer to that question! Thus, option A has modifier problem.

daagh is right to say that the option A is not a run-on sentence. To explain a little more: a run-on sentence is constructed with two (or more) independent clauses joined by a comma in stead of period or semicolon or conjunction or relational word.

To answer to a previous doubt/query: Option B is not a run-on sentence as the clauses are connected properly. Complete sentence with option B is:
During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible, rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, a situation that determined the design of the clipper ship.
Here "situation" is correctly modifying the earlier phrase where the situation is described.
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During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible, rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, determining the design of the clipper ship.

A) to carry larger loads more slowly, determining
"the way for a merchant to . . ." cannot determine the design of ship

B) to carry larger loads more slowly, a situation that determined
the situation of seeking for fast method of carry gold determine the need to develope a ship

C) carry larger loads more slowly, which determined

D) slowly carry larger loads which determined

E) carrying larger loads more slowly, and this was a situation in determining
"Carrying" is not prarrallel with "to move a limited amount", and "this was a situation in..." is awkward
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During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible, rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, determining the design of the clipper ship.

C) carry larger loads more slowly, which determined..............which refers to loads incorrectly.
D) slowly carry larger loads which determined..............which refers to loads incorrectly.
E) carrying larger loads more slowly, and this was a situation in determining.............carrying is not parallel with to move phrase.

Left with A and B
A) to carry larger loads more slowly, determining
B) to carry larger loads more slowly, a situation that determined

During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was
to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible,
rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, determining the design of the clipper ship.

This seems to mean that Merchant needs to move amount to SF instead of carrying loads slowly and he carries the larger loads slowly while determining the design of clipper ship.
This does not make sense in meaning.


whereas Option B says that

During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was
to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible,
rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, a situation that determined the design of the clipper ship.

a situation here correctly refers to the need to move the goods urgently to generate profits and this situation led to the design of clipper ship.
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During and immediately after the California gold rush, the way for a merchant to generate the most profit was to move a limited amount of scarce goods to San Francisco as quickly as possible, rather than to carry larger loads more slowly, determining the design of the clipper ship.

A) to carry larger loads more slowly, determining
B) to carry larger loads more slowly, a situation that determined
C) carry larger loads more slowly, which determined
D) slowly carry larger loads which determined
E) carrying larger loads more slowly, and this was a situation in determining


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In the underlined portion of the original sentence, you've got a verb (to carry) and a participle (determining). The answer choices allow you to convert the verb into a participle (carrying) and the participle into a verb (determined). You may wonder why this matters. Well, the participle determining makes the final phrase of the sentence (determining the design of the clipper ship) into a modifier. The problem is that it's not clear what precisely this phrase modifies: Did a part of this situation (perhaps the need for speed) determine the design of the clipper ship or did the entire situation taken together? Only (B) and (E) respond to this problem so you can eliminate all the others; which in (C) and (D) doesn't provide the clarification that we need. (E), in addition to its clumsy phrasing, is grammatically incorrect. By replacing to carry with carrying, it breaks the parallel structure of the sentence (the best option was to move...rather than to carry). (B) alone survives.
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