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GMAT Club Legend
Affiliations: HHonors Diamond, BGS Honor Society
Joined: 05 Apr 2006
Posts: 5926

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45

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21 Nov 2006, 04:27
I've been buried. I have over 30 essays sent to me in the last three or four days. I'm trying to get through it, but it might take a while. Someone paypal me \$4 so I can go buy coffee. Hah! Hang tight crew, I see em. Also I recieved the following from someone:

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Though I am not a gay but I want to kiss you. Kiss
Thanks a lot.

LOL

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

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Joined: 30 Mar 2006
Posts: 1728

Kudos [?]: 99 [0], given: 0

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21 Nov 2006, 04:56
Keep up the good work Rhyme.

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VP
Joined: 15 Jun 2006
Posts: 1124

Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

Schools: Chicago Booth

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21 Nov 2006, 05:02
I start thinking about sending you mine...

Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

GMAT Club Legend
Affiliations: HHonors Diamond, BGS Honor Society
Joined: 05 Apr 2006
Posts: 5926

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45

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21 Nov 2006, 05:09
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine...

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

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Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

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21 Nov 2006, 05:23
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine...

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.

OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM!

Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

GMAT Club Legend
Affiliations: HHonors Diamond, BGS Honor Society
Joined: 05 Apr 2006
Posts: 5926

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45

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21 Nov 2006, 05:23
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine...

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.

OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM!

sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!

Kudos [?]: 2194 [0], given: 7

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Joined: 15 Jun 2006
Posts: 1124

Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

Schools: Chicago Booth

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21 Nov 2006, 05:27
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine...

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.

OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM!

sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!

No worries. I will bide my time. I decided to postpone my Tuck app till January, when I will already know the Chicago, Wharton and (hopefully) Kellogg results.

Kudos [?]: 45 [0], given: 0

21 Nov 2006, 05:27
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