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Re: Experts believe that senior citizens with higher than average choleste [#permalink]
IMO B.

A and C - used 'and' introducing a subordinate clause - wrong
D - running in them is awkward, them does not have a clear antecedent
E - with a predisposition seems to refer cholesterol.
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Re: Experts believe that senior citizens with higher than average choleste [#permalink]
Experts believe that senior citizens with higher than average cholesterol (reading without underlined part) are more likely to die at an age below that of their life expectancy. This makes a perfect sentence.

so the underlined portion must talk about senior citizens only. C and E out in both family should be families.

A starts to talk about their families - not connected correctly in parallel to senior citizens

B and D the usage of (whose) is correct . D running in them is not required

B concise and correct answer
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Re: Experts believe that senior citizens with higher than average choleste [#permalink]
I didn't choose B because to me it seemed that 'whose' incorrectly refers to 'cholesterol'. Where did I go wrong?
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I didn't choose B because to me it seemed that 'whose' incorrectly refers to 'cholesterol'. Where did I go wrong?

Hi sudhirgupta93, in general, relative pronouns (except which) have flexibility in terms of what they are modifying. In general, the relative pronouns modify the nearest word that makes both grammatical and logical sense.

By the way, curious to know the source of this question. Reminded me of the following very similar GMATPrep question:

Studies show that young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.

(A) and their families have a history of high blood pressure
(B) whose families have a history of high blood pressure
(C) and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family
(D) whose families have a history of high blood pressure running in them
(E) with a history of high blood pressure running in their family
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Re: Experts believe that senior citizens with higher than average choleste [#permalink]
Shouldn't there be a comma before the word 'whose' to make option B correct?

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Shouldn't there be a comma before the word 'whose' to make option B correct?

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Hello gmatbalar,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, a "whose/who" phrase only needs to be preceded by a comma if it is a non-essential modifier, one that conveys information not vital to the core meaning of the sentence.

Here, the meaning is that senior citizens who have higher than average cholesterol and whose families have a predisposition to cardiovascular disease are more likely to die at an age below that of their life expectancy; both conditions need to be met, so the "whose" phrase conveys necessary information.

We hope this helps.
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